I read a few chapters, and then stopped. The spelling is horrific, the plot too thin for words. I think we all normally try to identify with the main character. A "what would I do" type thing. Had he walked into my apartment, I would have laughed, mentioned karma and kicked him out in the street. She is such a doormat.

Sadly, I will not be continuing on. Fix this.

Excellent story! Really enjoyed reading this, and will have to read again in the future :-) I look forward to reading more of your work!

This story might be great, but i will never know because of some awful spelling.

wow... . .fuck... . . .act... . .read...like. .

. . . . . . ... ..bella...and...jake!

. . . .for. . . . ...assward... . .happen... .dumber...
.. . . . . .need. . ... . . ...

. ..making. . . . . . . . ... . . ... . . . ...just.a... . . .her...stupid... . . . .
.. . . .shit.. . . . ... .have... . . ...way.. . . ...

. .fuck... . . . . .in. . ..a... .and.. . .shit

. . . . .day... .. . . .assward... . . . . . . . .him... . .stupid.. . . .some... .. . . . ... . . .for. . . . .edward... ... . .a. ... . . . ... .and. . ... .her... . . ... . . .got.a. .relationship... . .shit... ...total...crap

. . . . . . . .bella... ...what. ... . . . . ... .ass

. . . ...lol... . ... . . . . . . ... . ... . ... . ... . .dippers.. . . ... . . . .times

. . . . . .it... . . . . .know...hes.28... . . . . ... ... . ... . ..finding.. . . ... .hell

yes, I know that whenever someone starts a comment like that it is rude, but your spellings suck. You really need to fix them
Sine sine x, a trig value. Sign signature
Ruff Dog's bark, rough hard, or coarse (depending on the context)
Douse putting out a fire, Does Carry Out
Maybe, you're doing this on purpose but i honestly like where this story is going so please fix it or someone is going to get annoyed and stop reading it

I was really excited to read this story. I enjoy a good love/hate situation as much as anybody. I also have a TON of respect for people who are brave enough to "put themselves out there" by posting a story. I honestly tried to read it, however the spelling and grammatical errors made me cringe. I can understand some people have a better grasp on the technical aspects of writing, what I DO NOT understand, is if you know your "spelling sucks" (your words, not mine), why not ask for a beta or pre-reader to edit/look it over BEFORE you post it? I'm sure there are many other FFN members out there who would be happy to help you out. That being said, I'm sorry but I just can't bring myself to finish the story. Reading something with so many errors just makes the experience too frustrating for me. I hope you continue to write in the future, because it's a great creative outlet. I simply encourage you to edit before you post.
Blessings, jayspeanut