Wow, why don't you strip all the extra problems of this fic and just make it straight ass kissing. The character favoritism made this unreadable. Bye.

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omg loved it

Loved the joke about Britney! My name is Brittany too.

Sorry to say I gave up reading it because i couldn't get past the awful spelling. You should get someone to proofread.

I read the A/N but seriously starting to get annoyed with bella being so self deprecating and blind. ahh

You're spelling is awful.

i loved your story... there was spelling mistakes and gramatical errors. but overall i loved it. theplot was amaizing and i loved it how you made peace between edward and jacob. continue writing stories like this

Well, I tried. I stuck it out for 21 chapters, but this is freaking ridiculous. I hate stories that take 30 freaking chapters to get people together. Your Bella is an idiot, and so self-unaware that she might as well be legally blind. Your Jacob is childish, simple, and not at all likable. And your Edward...jeez could the guy be anymore boring and self deprecating?

Great ending...I really loved your story.

This chapter was so funny! I could really picture it in my mind...I was cracking up.

I am loving what you've written so far! I really like your version of E and B - I just want to kick Edward though! How can he act like that he's just breaking her heart... Am so glad to know it's a HEA :)

haha alice being jewish is adorable!

VERY GREAAAATTTT STORY! I LOVE IT! You did such a gret job here. And for the end, well, they have so many kids! Hahahahaha

loved it