Reviews for Continuing On
Vamplady123 chapter 28 . 3/1/2012
I absolutely love it! It was just sad how Edward was finale going to tell bella he likes her that she goes home and tells him that she likes Jacob. What bad luck! I couldn't put this story away!
sue1zide chapter 4 . 10/28/2011
I think you are looking for the word: does, instead of: douse?
sue1zide chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
The only spelling error I saw was for the word "sign". You spelled it "sine".
la pitchoune chapter 30 . 9/12/2011
this story was really good, full of twists and so funny to read.

thank you very much for writing it
twimamma chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Great first chapter of your first fic. There were a few small typos, but certainly nothing that would take away from your plot. I've read a few stories where Edward and Bella become unexpected roomies, so I'll be interested to see what new twists and turns you've brought to your interpretation. Great job so far.
Disney101 chapter 4 . 8/20/2011
Douse is actually does...fufill is one word and then some words have messed up tenses
Disney101 chapter 2 . 8/20/2011
Loren is actually lauren and ruff is rough. Also you have some missing words here and there
Disney101 chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Uh I like the story plot so far but when you say sine it is a math term I think you are looking for the word sign and at one point you spelled write right... Just thought that you could fix it.
Alexward chapter 30 . 8/11/2011
I just found this incredible story and I had to say that I love with, is light but still has their moments of angst, you are an incredible writer keep it up...

mcanary chapter 30 . 8/7/2011
This story is just great. I only tend to read just completed stories and imagine my surprise when i got to the end that it has been done for a while. It saddens me that i could have read this story so much longer ago. I admit at first i had my doubt due to the spelling errors, but i was hooked with the first chapter and it was thrilling to see how your writing style improved so much with each chapter. You are a very good story teller and it was a joy to read. Thanks so much for sharing.
kinia616 chapter 30 . 8/6/2011
OMG! This story is FANTASTIC! I really enjoy reading it. You really did a great job! I lake You'r style of writing and everything! :) I hope You will make more stories like that:)

Good Luck! :)
weirdosaywhatt chapter 4 . 7/31/2011
douses' , 'ruff'

your spelling really does suck.
WorshipTheLight LiveForTheTwi chapter 32 . 7/31/2011
really great story. i read it in one sitting.
WorshipTheLight LiveForTheTwi chapter 32 . 7/31/2011
really great story. i read it in one sitting.
LaniBartend chapter 30 . 7/31/2011
Loved the story, good work :)
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