Reviews for The Viper's Pit
werwolf-yasya chapter 3 . 11/8/2017
Wonderful. Thank author.
KyoREQUIEM chapter 3 . 8/1/2017
Kaname... Why are you being so mean to poor Zero T-T
After reading all those fluffy fics, this story makes me so sad...
Marxou chapter 3 . 8/23/2015
I feel like this could have been toned down a bit. It was also very unrealistic in the sense that all Zero had to do was tell Yuki how he was being treated. This would have been perfect if it hadn't been for this.
DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 3 . 7/16/2015
AMAZING JOB I LOVE IT! BUT ITS SAD THAT IT ENDS NOW
DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 2 . 7/16/2015
AMAZING JOB I LOVE IT! THIS IS INTERESTING
DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 1 . 7/16/2015
AMAZING JOB I LOVE IT!
kuroh chapter 3 . 5/25/2015
countinue please I want to read more
Guest chapter 3 . 4/13/2015
You said drama and romance. Where the hell is the drama or the romance?
lampshadezz chapter 3 . 3/22/2015
you are SUCH sadist, you know that?
i was really hoping that (against all odds) kaname would have some pity for zero and be even a little kinder... . it was, however, how i expected it to go. i mean, a story can;t have that big a turn-around, can it? from totally-cruel-sadistic-and-heartless kaname to kind-and-caring kaname is just too much to ask for.
but nevertheless, i enjoyed it. does that mean i'm a sadist like you? i just can't resist kanamexzero goodness...
Gallant Halliviere chapter 3 . 8/22/2014
I. Hate. Kaname.
mizkitty104 chapter 3 . 10/13/2013
Amazing
ichiruzuka chapter 3 . 8/6/2013
Er... I'm speechless again.
I think Kaname's characterization is okay, or at least within the limit. But Zero is really whoring himself. Zero is my favorite character, but seeing him and Kaname here...

And answering your question, for the rating M, it's quite alright.
XoX Cherry Blossom Girl XoX chapter 3 . 7/16/2013
Wow...I pity Zero. Kaname is a meriless posessive bastard!
Even if they ended up having sex...it was hardly worth the pain Zero went through.
DulcetRipple chapter 3 . 4/1/2012
This was amazing! Though a part of me was indeed waiting for Kaname to act a little kinder, it's fine the way it is. At least the interpretation of his personality remained the same throughout the entire fic. I enjoyed reading this very much although I flinched several times (I usually visualize what I read)~
Fox-Sin chapter 3 . 3/8/2012
I don't understand the ending does Zero want what Kaname is doing to him?
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