Reviews for Warmth
CentauRita chapter 17 . 5/2/2014
You know I was just thinking about Bella's first hunt by SM, today after reading chappie 16 'Liberated'. SM hunt was good and all that, but...your take on the 'enjoyable' second hunt, in my opinion...should have been their, first! Picturing a bare footed, billowy wispy shredded dressed, bloodied vampy Bella...from SM book? I mean...Come on! how could Edward, EVER, resist!

Loved Alice showing up, BTW. Nice touch.
CentauRita chapter 16 . 5/1/2014
I'm sure Alice...saw this and has the replacement chair for delivery in the morning 8D
CentauRita chapter 15 . 5/1/2014
Primal and feral...in the 'Warmth' of their love ;} Is the Cottage still standing from all of their Frottage? Oh...and quite a 'bit' more ;[
CentauRita chapter 14 . 4/30/2014
Loving me EPOV...buckling myself in, ready for another...ride ;} Thank you.
CentauRita chapter 13 . 4/30/2014
It was rocking!
CentauRita chapter 12 . 4/30/2014
My Bella, just more durable. ;}
CentauRita chapter 11 . 4/30/2014
Challenge received and conquered!...for all eternity!
CentauRita chapter 10 . 4/30/2014
Oooo, Did Bella just challenge Edward and throw the gauntlet down? Oooo, I think that she did...Hmmmm, WWED...What Will Edward Do? 'Rise' to the occasion, of 'inter'course'! ;P
CentauRita chapter 9 . 4/30/2014
Didn't miss Edward changing Bella, at all. Thank you.
CentauRita chapter 8 . 4/30/2014
Glad Edward took Bella in the Blue Room...sand can be so intrusive and gets in every nook and cranny, oh it's also abrasive and can rub you raw... but, I guess it would polish Edward, shiny ;D
mickeymackey chapter 8 . 4/30/2014
You totally lost me. You end this chapter indicating that she wakes up with her nudger but instead it is after her change. It makes no sense. It feels like there are several chapters missing.
CentauRita chapter 7 . 4/30/2014
I think it was the 'bloody' juice of the strawberry, dripping down Bella's chin that sent Edward into a vampire...moment! Oh, yes...Delicious! 'Creamed' me, totally! ;P
CentauRita chapter 6 . 4/30/2014
Oooo, I just so want to 'egg' him 'On'ward!
CentauRita chapter 5 . 4/30/2014
I love your MORE than willing Edward! So does Bella ;}
CentauRita chapter 4 . 4/30/2014
'Please" is a very powerful Ed'word' ;} LOL..HaHaHa!
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