|Reviews for A special Toy|
| L13R18N32 chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
...One word: SEXY
(i LOVE it)
| littlen00bgyn chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Very interesting. I like how you snuck your favorite ships in there casually- Luxord and Larxene, Xaldin and Xigbar... and that Marluxia was the one to give Saix the sex toy. That's amazing.
I find your work very articulate and well-translated.
I was just going to ask about Saix saying he loved Xemnas when you cleared the matter up :)
"Saix began to trust into Xemnas's mouth." I believe the word you meant to use was "thrust."
Very nice, overall. Hmm, though I think Xemnas should have confiscated Marluxia's gift and used it on Saix.
| PyRoAj chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
Lerato! My Fabio! I loved this story! Excellent work, I will be looking forward to next stories.
| Drowning in Ice chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
8D I read this on DevitantArt! I still love it, though I don't know why fanfiction. net raped your formatting. I remember it being fine on DeviantArt. o.o
| K-Gforever chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
The smut is very hot but it was hard to read due to the formating. It'd be better to use quotation marks rather than the lines for speech, and the paragraphs could be divided better, an extra line in between them would do. All in all, I love the pairing and idea.