Reviews for Wide Open Spaces
Guest chapter 75 . 7/30/2015
How could you do that Jacob and Nessie is the perfect couple and you just ruined a relationship because of a child Even if the child was Foxworth's. In the sequel this better all work out. OK I know I'm only reading it now but if you make a story like this i'm going to leave a comment.
YaleAceBella12 chapter 76 . 7/1/2014
I love it! Is there a Sequel!
katherine chapter 76 . 3/18/2014
I think he should have told them about the vision. Emma just made him to do it. And now she is keeping them apart.
Katherine chapter 22 . 3/18/2014
Until now I was not sure if Leah will have a relationship with Chuck or imprint on the guy of Aro (forgot the name too complicated for me as non English native speaker to remember) but I guess Chuck wins :-)
Katherine chapter 19 . 3/18/2014
I would expect something like "Oh, I will give him this breed of two half-breed but not going to marry him and have a sex with him" from her. :-))
Jenmoon1 chapter 72 . 2/13/2014
First of all let me say I liked your story but I felt like some of the caricters ooc also I can't imangion Nessie feeling like an exserment and she always called the caricters by aunt and uncal grandma grandpa thanks for writing this story
monnychiz chapter 76 . 1/24/2013
I love the story so much :D but I have to admit, I'm dissapointed with the ending. Could've been better if Jacob and Nessie end up together again, or at least don't make the story so 'hanging'. But still, good (y)
Angelm chapter 76 . 10/25/2012
I like it sooooo muuuchhhhhh! I luv it! Whyd you stop there? It fell short though like it needs more explanation. But still, amazing!
Always-second-best-AEH chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
i like the diff. perspective!
Lei chapter 76 . 6/15/2011
Wow! I am really shocked you ended your story that way. I never saw that one coming. It is sad that jacob and nessie drifted apart because of their children. I never read a story that was done in this manner. It really makes you think. I'm glad that your doing a sequel because I would have been upset if you left it that way. There was just to many unanswered questions. The mark of a good story.
RaeTakesTheWorld chapter 13 . 3/16/2011
Aw I loved it lol
RaeTakesTheWorld chapter 12 . 3/16/2011
I loved this chapter! You have such unique was of discribing everything, such as the pull Renesmee and Jake have, and how Nessie grows D It's wonderful
RaeTakesTheWorld chapter 10 . 3/16/2011
Wow crazy! I've got a story like that with the whole "in heat" thing. You could check it out if you wanted. It's called The Way of the Dog
RaeTakesTheWorld chapter 6 . 3/16/2011
I really really liked this chapter...N I've been reviewing almost every chapter, but since you have like 75 chapters or whatever I'm just going to review the ones where I actually have something important to say lol
RaeTakesTheWorld chapter 4 . 3/16/2011
Good chapter D
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