|Reviews for Stockholm, 1981 to 1998|
| JaneDoh0 chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
This is absolutely brilliant. You capture the tragedy of Severus's life and manipulations central to Albus in a really tightly written one shot.
| 227h chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Well, this is a fine and dandy fic that will perfectly complement an after-lunch of soft music and lazing in the wintersun. I would recommend, as a gastronomical accompaniment, those small citrus cakes that can fit in the palm of our hand.
Maybe add a measure of honey, so that annoying breadcrumbs won't fall to your keyboard, depriving you of the use of the h, the e, the l or the p; which would be a rather bad thing, as you will be needing those letters quite soon.
The especially prudent will have added a dose of cyanide to the citrus cake, to help with the mortal pains this fic can cause in the reader's little heart.
| Raeshi chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
Poor Severus, he never really had a chance. Everyone uses him. I like how you portrayed Dumbledore. Not that I hate him or anything but you can kind of see it in the way he treats Severus. How he uses him for his purposes.
I guess this pairing doesn't have much of a following by the amount of reviews you have. Surprising, since this is a good story.
| BLAHBLAHBLAH92831 chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
DUMBLES, YOU'RE AN ASS HOLE.
| Librasmile chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
I was scanning through the site and saw this story only had 5 reviews! Scandalous! (Although it makes me feel better since I only got 4 for my Albus-Severus story For the Price of My Familiar. I mean if YOU only got 5, that's not necessarily a bad sign because you're an excellent writer.)
I loved this story when I read it. I think you have a delicate touch with character development and plot. I even like the unresolved ending although it drives me crazy and makes me want to kill Dumbledore all over again.
I love the way you make use of the unspoken realities in Severus and Albus' relationship and how the use of power affects it.
Most of all I like the way you use this short story to create the sense of a fully realized world. Most authors can't do that in a one-shot. Well done.
| yggdrasilxxx chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
I like how the machiavellian plots of Dumbledore are underlined in each part of the story, I don't think it's something that appears usually
| Amarinta chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
This is absolutely one of the best fiction about Snape i've ever read. And absolutely the most beautiful fanfiction about Snape of all. I love your other fanfiction, but this is so full of a desperate need for love i almost cried. I'd like to translate it in Italian and put it on an Italian Slash Fanfiction on Harry Potter, if you don't mind. I'll wait for your answer
| SillyLesbianPanda chapter 1 . 12/19/2008
Wow... this surprised me. Poetic, but not in a corny or sappy way. Nicely done.
| excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
After all, Severus has never quite been loved before.
-Or is now. Or ever. He is but a game-piece, and dies knowing it. What a waste of a life, and a soul.
And of the best character in canon, too.
| illicitgrace chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
Wow! So very interesting. What a different potrayl of Severus. And a very good dipiction of Albus - weaving in what we know of his personality in the post DH world.
So good to see fic from you again!