Reviews for November Naughtiness
Honey Hogs the Mirror chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
hey i really liked your fic D made me giggle

yuu/allen is 1 of ma fav pairins

please put part 2 up soon im hooked on dis x3
lhbaghead chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
My very first thought after reading this was "Oh. How... Deliciously awkward and... awesome ."

I love the situation you put them in, how clever and seductive (for lack of a better word) Kanda is, and, Allen, oh Allen . You're going to be scarred for years .

For the laughs, it couldn't be anyone but Jerry and Komui. They made me giggle, and I'm sure if I had been there I would have been quite traumitized.

I'm happy you didn't make Allen and Kanda get it on in the bathtub, because that would have ruined the entire fic- it would have just turned into porn and it'd be impossible for them to even do anything more than g-rated with Komui and Jerry doing R rated things in the next room and- what I'm basically saying is I like the plot . I also like to ramble.

I'm looking forward to part two .

-Baghead
Sky91 chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
I love it! your style is really great and the plot is hilarious and exciting at the same time. Well done, I hope you'll writte the next chapter soon.
l Kataragi Souen l chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
Your fic has only one word to describe it.. AWESOME XDD. I love the plot.. well, I especially liked the part where Kanda and Allen were in the bath tub.. _ It rocks~! Do make a sequel or somehow to this.. please? _
Askafroa chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
Wow,that was amazing! You're such a talented writer. Allen and Kanda were perfect. And you never would've thought about Komui having relations with Jerry. I hope you add more chapter! It was awsome!
orangesandmoons chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
pleasse update, please, this fic is so awesome!
Reineh chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
Omg, I want more w
HikariAi chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
This was just good... _ PLEASE update soon...
Amayada chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
never expected Kanda to be like that...anyways please update soon...I can't wait for your next chapter :)
SilentKiller1 chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
i would run like crazy allen
firedraygon chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Hahahaha, so great. Love this situation. Can't wait to see how the whole love potion thing plays out. Please write more soon!

~fd97
Hinjintetsusou chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
~~ lovveed it!
Alice Melan chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
I like this story, it has a good balance between humor and *blushes* uh, not humor.
ramenluv chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
This story is amazing! It's a must read for all Yullen fans!
SengetsuPwnzU chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
DO A SEQUEL GODDAMMIT!
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