Reviews for Helpless
Amy BlinkthePirate chapter 2 . 7/12/2009
I think this story goes very deep into Spot's heart and into the heart of many people today. I believe your interpretation of Spot Conlon is well-founded. Please update! Great Work!
0xlittlexmissxsunshinex0 chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
just wonderful. keep writting spot fanfics

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animagus pawz chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
I am going to say that the narrator is either David or an unnamed Brooklander...and I am intrigued to read more about this mysterious love that Spot wants to forget...hm...could she possibly be inspired by someone we know? :) Great job! Now onward to read the sequel!

-pawz
swiftfoot chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
Very good first chapter Shadow, I liked how you kept the point of view relitivly open so anyone could imagine a character interacting with Spot. I look forward to reading more, and where you explain more of the history behined the two character's in question.