I like it a lot! Personally, my favorite colossus was Phalanx, and I HATED the fight against Celosia. Just getting on its back was SO IRRITATING! Then again, that could count for a lot of them.

Well, one time I was fighting Phalanx when he did a barrel roll and my guy litarilly ran around and on top of Phalanx's stomach and managed to get to his back without even trembling. As for Celosia, I somehow managed to make him run off the cliff by dodging his run ang got ontop of him by using the flame to scare him into a prone state.

So jakky-boy is with wander now. Don't mind asking but could you have... DARK JAK make his debut in the next chappy (nothin like an extremely pissed off demon to kill an effing collosus).

So jakky-boy is with wander now. Don't mind asking but could you have... DARK JAK make his debut in the next chappy (nothin like an extremely pissed off demon to kill an effing collosus).

i never knew the colossals had names,now that i know,it makes me kind of sad,i killed them because i thought they were evil nameless things.

what are their names

Yay, an update! Sorry it took me so long to read. Fun chapter! I thought about using the dreadlocks but the back seemed more entertaining for the fourth (our label for him was "not the brightest bulb in the box"). Jak is adjusting well, and 'cover his donkey' was just wonderfully clever. I also quite like how you write Wander and his thoughts. I am very curious to see how the story will continue _

Cover his donkey, that made me laugh so hard. I'm glad you updated. I don't remember beating the fourth one by using its 'pigtails' as Jak put it. I used its tail. Great chapter but I'm wondering what's going on it Haven City with Jak gone...

Great story.

Wow, this has potential. Wonder if Daxter would ever believe Jak once he gets back. Definitely an interesting concept. _

This is very good. Please contiune this.

- You updated! Oh happy day! Nice battle, my dad and mom got me this game for Christmas and I love it. Can't wait to see what happens. Looking forward to the next chapter, keep it up Mon

Yo yo man! Come on! This book is awesome! the writing, the plot, the detail i love it. don't leave me hangin' for long dude. i gotta read the end of this!

Great story. That's how Jak SHOULD act in that time. Can't wait till the next chapy. ~foxy