Reviews for Fractured Lines
starfire201 chapter 5 . 12/9/2008
Hadn't been aware you had updated, well here goes. A reprogramming patch which now cannot be removed, likely permanent damage, and Starscream originally an Autobot before that. I have seen the idea of Starscream being an undercover agent for the Autobots a couple of times, one humorous, one with a very dark twist, but never this before. Nicely done, and since this was a prequel to the fourth chapter, I'm guessing Thundercracker never was able to get Starscream help, considering the last comment here and a comment that Soundwave made in the fourth chapter concerning Thundercracker and his trinemates. Only a few minor capitalization errors, but those can be overlooked in favor of the content itself. Nicely done.
Jessie07 chapter 3 . 9/9/2008
Great chapter!
starfire201 not signed in chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
Rather thought provoking drabble here. And much truth to it, even in the real world.
story reader chapter 3 . 9/8/2008
It was worth a chuckle though, even if you didn't like it much.
Jessie07 chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
This is a very well written little story! I really like it! Anyway, keep up the great work and good luck with your writer's block!