Reviews for The Desired
N'Weaver chapter 11 . 8/20/2014
And i've managed to get to the of the story...and my heart is broken. Literally, torn to shreds. I can't believe this is happening. I finally get a good story, after hours of searching, in my trembling hands and the only thing I come out with is a battered soul. I don't blame you author for not updating, but I do blame you for making a story so thrilling, so awesomely written, that I have to suffer in infinite cliff hangers over my head. I will have nightmares because this story will not continue. I will.

Thank you for giving me, us, an amazing story.
N'Weaver chapter 4 . 8/20/2014
you killed them...YOU KILLED THEM

May God have mercy on her soul.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/5/2014
Its really sad because she just lost her parent's and then she loses her team it's really depressing but i guess you needed to do it to give a reason why she became who she is in the following chapters also great writing good description and somehow good plot but still depressing though...

saying:

"if can't see the bad things in life you can't truly appreciate the good things, but if you only see the good things you take it for granted, so always look at both to know how much you should appreciate both"
Shadamyisthebestlol chapter 4 . 7/25/2014
So not fair not even two survived :(
Guest chapter 4 . 6/16/2014
why...
why...
WAH-
KunoichiAbi chapter 11 . 4/29/2014
Please contiue this story! :)
KunoichiAbi chapter 4 . 4/28/2014
Beautiful detail
belladu57 chapter 11 . 1/22/2014
Very good
AsianGirl10 chapter 11 . 12/30/2013
Ur really awesome at writng! Plz rite more!:D
notenoughfreetime89 chapter 11 . 12/1/2013
I have read this story several times, and once again, it has never failed to move me. I am sad that you have not continued with it, as the very obvious cliffhanger that we, your readers, are left with is maddening! I will continue to keep this story tucked away for a rainy day, but will also wish that I had more of this fantastic plot to read!
lnfo chapter 11 . 10/8/2013
finish the story i love it so much omg
this is one of the best stories ive read thus far and ive read alot of fics too
Guest chapter 11 . 9/27/2013
Please continue this story its brilliant and i would love to see what ideas u have in mind for it. It would be such a waste to just drop the fanfic because it has SO MUCH POTENTIAL. Not that it already isn't great though. So even though you haven't updated in years i will be holding out some hope that you do
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
Me once again haha hurry up woman! Grr
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
Me again! Make more!
Guest chapter 11 . 8/22/2013
PLEASE!
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