Reviews for Akatsuki's Lily
Mai-chan803 chapter 2 . 7/10/2014
Nooo need more! Hahaha anywa hope u update soon
gabi-is-a-good-girl chapter 2 . 12/21/2013
I love the story so far and I really hope you keep writing it
Kokochibi139 chapter 2 . 10/14/2013
Omfg update . . It ranks second to my love for Nutella. (Trust me that means a lot.)
Miku tQm chapter 2 . 9/26/2013
hinatas first kisss hummmm. its hard to decide i really want a itahina romance but deichan is so cute, but want to be with itachi btw UPDATE!
snowkatl chapter 2 . 7/1/2013
This fic is awesome! x3
If you can please update!
BlueBeast chapter 2 . 6/19/2013
Love it plz update soon
kandita chapter 2 . 4/23/2013
Did u rewrite this? Anyway if possible can u please start updating again...and if Hinata plan to find love I'd like Gaara Itachi or the lazy Nara
Yu Nguyen chapter 2 . 4/4/2013
Awww, Tobi is a good boy! Cute
MentalHope chapter 2 . 3/17/2013
Pwetty pweeeeaase continue this story! c:
astraea.12 chapter 2 . 2/20/2013
This is pretty good! I love Hinata harems. :) Are you going to pair her with someone? Because it's kinda hard to choose. I love Itachi, but Deidara is so cute here! XD
Hyoyeon chapter 2 . 2/15/2013
You're a genius. You're writing is brilliant. I'm hoping she gets together with Deidara. ha
Guest chapter 2 . 2/14/2013
ME! I WILL BE HINATA'S FIRST KISS! hehehe ( / )

Let everyone kiss her for the firat rime simultaneously, hehehe

I SO love Hinata :D
xAngelReaperx chapter 3 . 10/20/2012
Please update soon! Lol 'Nuff said...
Hishiko-Chan1999 chapter 3 . 10/2/2012
update! XD
kandita chapter 3 . 8/26/2012
Very nice...however it needs major proof-reading and spell-check...a lot of the sentences are fragments and can be a tad bit confusing...the plot is good and I like how u took your time with the opening of the story...as for a few things I am quiet sure that Deidara eyes are NOT BLUE actually they are grey...as for Hinata I am quiet sure her eyes are white...I see the manga and the anime...anyway...I like how u put the snowball fight it was nicely done so to introduce everyone...but as always Sasuke is already suspicious of her...I'm curious as to how Neji Hanabi and especially Hiashi going to take it when they all meet up at school...
I find it cute that Deidara has a crush on her and got jealous...and I am a bit curious about her and Utachi friendship...it seems as if there's more than just student sensi for her...I'll be keeping an eye for that...as for Tobi I'm not too trusting of him...but I'll see as u progress with the story...as I stated earlier u r missing Konan so undo hope u will add her to the story also Zetsu as well...
Please update one day because this is very a interesting story and it's worth reading:)
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