|Reviews for Once a King|
| Kamaline chapter 1 . 2/26
This short little story was beautiful! I love the idea of their parents realizing something was different about their children - that they were more mature, wise, regal beyond their years. You portrayed it really well! I'd love to read another Narnia fic from you! Please?
| hpswst101 chapter 1 . 1/22
That was nice, how you brought back the High King into England. It was very sweet. Thank you for posting it.
| I Wish I Could Go To Hogwarts chapter 1 . 8/29/2016
Beautiful, though I often think that expressions being so easily read, it feels natural here- that bit about Peter's expression being the same as a comrades is good.
| Wildhorses1492 chapter 1 . 7/4/2016
Ooh, you have brought back some small flare of my Narnian inspiration! It is a tiny, fingerling of an ember, almost ashes, but it exists and I hope it catches to burn brighter. Thanks for something so wonderful and amazing!
| Golden Bearded Dragon chapter 1 . 4/23/2016
Wow. This was amazing! While I was reading this, I wasn't sure if I wanted to cry, or smile; my feels couldn't decide. You are a fabulous writer, and I loved the depth of the emotions in this oneshot. Thank you for writing this! ;)
| tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 8/15/2015
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2015
Wonderful, heartfelt. Thank you for that little ray of Narnian sunshine.
| Zelda12343 chapter 1 . 1/29/2015
That was entirely too short, but that's the only thing I can find fault with. That was a really great idea-if anyone would notice the difference in the Pevensie children after they'd come back from Narnia, it would be their parents. You wrote it really well, too-I could see the scene unfolding in front of me.
| WaywardDaughter617 chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
Can you write another Narnia fanfic? This one was amazing!
| MCH chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
Interesting look at Peter after Narnia, and a chance to see Peter's father after he came back from WW2. For both men to remember and maybe start to come to terms with the effects of war on themselve
Good job Mr Pevensie didn't have to speak to Edmund that would trouble is soul, probably more than after he spoke to Peter.
| m0ckingbird77 chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
Wow. Your descriptions are just...magnificent. Beautiful job!
| Flameheart chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
Can you make another Narnia Fanfic?...Please?
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
Wow! That was amazing! I love how you write such intimate moments between characters that deepen the way I think about them. Thank you for writing this.
| Junzahkrii chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
| Imogen Kellie chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
whoa! this is beautiful, i dont know why i never read this one! I never really stopped to realize how Peter must have felt after so many years of being King. You caught it perfectly. Good job!