Reviews for Ghost
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 16 . 2/7/2013
So they did get one more day with him. And know the truth.
Super Lizard chapter 16 . 1/13/2012

Sad for Tom, and also the other Tom. The only flaw here seems to be that it was difficult to tell Tom the Father and Tom the Son apart in the text. Perhaps if you had maintained "Tommy" for Junior after the appearance of Tom Senior?
Gohan Hug chapter 14 . 3/13/2011
Great story so far! It's nice to see well-written and in-character stories in this fandom.
crokettsgirl chapter 16 . 10/15/2010
Wow I just loved the idea for this story. Your writing brought out emotions in me and of course the last few chapters made me cry. If you still write you did real well back in 2008 just a few spots where the tenses jumped around. I have seen this before and just phrased it in the right tense. Ohter wise this was a beautiful story. The feeling that went through Tom on the day of his father's passing and then for Doug to think of that wonderful idea. I thought that was great, you had them in character and did them well. Especailly how Tom's emotions came tumbling out when he found out his father was in his apartment and alive. Drunk as he was he couldn't fight the emotions and watching them explode as you wrote them and how they turned as they were kidnapped and then almost killed was brilliant. But like I said from the time He was dying and then died I cried, but again you had Tom in such perfect character from the yelling and denial to the crying and feeling guilty. This was one heck of a story. Sue
xofreethelightox chapter 16 . 1/2/2009
oh wow. amazing story! the ending was beautiful and wrapped the story up perfectly
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 16 . 9/28/2008
oh my god!

this last chapter was simply beautiful. the whole, i look up to you thing, i want to be just like you, that made me cry any more. my voice is about to crack but you did so beautifully and i can't wait to read more of your work. please write a new story soon! i love how you wrote tommy!

anyways, please keep up the excellent work. you have a beautiful talent. don't forget that.
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 14 . 9/28/2008
"I’m so sorry, please forgive me, please! Please Daddy, forgive me, please."

Okay you had me literally crying at that part. When he called his father "Daddy" that really got me. And his whole reaction "you coward...don't you die on us again" and the cursing, you did a brilliant job! so much anger, sadness, and emotion! i am favoriting this story now!
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 12 . 9/28/2008
omg! he can't kill Mr. Hanson!
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 10 . 9/28/2008
oh-no! poor tommy!
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 9 . 9/28/2008
"Don't 'yo coach' me, Penhall!'

hahahaha that was priceless. I can totally see Fuller saying that. Another great chapter! Oh! Doug HAS to save them, he just HAS to!
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 8 . 9/28/2008

Mark is evil, just pure evil. Dragging Mrs. Hanson into this mess! Jeeze!
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 7 . 9/28/2008
ok i am the hugest hanson-fangirl known to this earth so right about now (ch 7) i just want to run over and give him a humongous hug! he sounds like he really needs it.
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 5 . 9/28/2008
omg poor tommy! geeze, i'd be so freaked out if someone i knew was dead was standing in my living room! great job!
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 2 . 9/28/2008
Aw! That was so sweet what the Jump Street gang did for Tom!
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
So I was skimming the stories on here and decided I'll read this one and so far I've just read the first chapter and I already love it! I can't wait to read the others!
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