|Reviews for The Count's World: Weapons and Redemption|
| Kiramaru chapter 12 . 2/8
Hey, here is Kiramaru,
You remember? The one translating? So I found a quite irritating point in this chapter.
The stories are brillant but I want to hint to a few things I have noticed during translating that could be irritating for some readers (even though these two things are so small they barely get noticed).
Mimi says that she found the green mushroom but before it actually was Dimentio, who found the 1-Up-Shroom under that bush. I will probably follow that because of the conversation. Maybe Mimi thinks she found it and not him ;)
Another thing. I do not exactly remember which chapter it was (I believe it was chapter 3?) but during that conversation between Nawrocki and Count Bleck they said "west wing" and at the end during the conversation between Nastasia and Count Bleck they said "east wing" (or it was the other way around, with east and west).
As I said, it is such a small thing but I was quite confused and needed to pick either one xD
So yeah, that was about all. I still love these stories and I am happy to share your nice work with those who are not really able to understand english perfectly yet.
| Sparkling-nexis137 chapter 18 . 10/22/2015
BRAVO! An excellent epic to add to the episodic tales of euphoria and epiphany that is Count Bleck's World! (Oh, I do so love alliteration.) This was brilliantly written, and I'm so thankful that you wrote this amazing piece of literature. GLORIOUS JOB!
| GamerGirl54321 chapter 18 . 7/8/2014
Nice ending! I hope that the potion doesn't fail!
| GamerGirl54321 chapter 10 . 6/30/2014
"You'll have to find them first. I'll give you a hint: they aren't holding up my hands."
Mr. L shuddered. "Everything about you is creepy, Dimentio."
But... Dang, Dimentio must be feeling so lost...
| GamerGirl54321 chapter 5 . 6/30/2014
Wait... Did Dimentio almost kill himself?
But the reference was clever :D
| GamerGirl54321 chapter 3 . 6/30/2014
Wait... They can turn Timpani back into a human?
I AM EXCITED!
| GamerGirl54321 chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
Sooner than you like?
| Space Dimentio chapter 18 . 1/25/2014
Friendship lessons? Whoo!
| Ginger the Espeon chapter 18 . 7/26/2012
LOL im not touching you im not touching you LOL
| Ginger the Espeon chapter 10 . 7/26/2012
LOL I LAUGHED SO HARD AT MIMI'S GOODBYE
| justj0sh1ng chapter 18 . 4/24/2012
32,000 words later, I can only say wow; what an awesome story. I can't describe what it is with your writing style that keeps me reading these 10,000 words on average stories but I can't get enough of it. It's almost like your writing gives me this warm childish feeling that I've lost sight of for years. I can't in good heart criticize this in the slightest, it's that much fun to read. Anyways yeah, good stuff. Thanks for putting in the unimaginable amount of effort it takes to produce these.
| MrLRocks78 chapter 18 . 1/30/2012
One word. AWESOME.
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/13/2011
O'Chunks... It's okay... Nastasia doesn't deserve you!
But, why's the Count so depressed? I mean, sure, it's very bad o not get redemption, but God gives you forgiveness when you really want it, and when you ask for it...
Why can't Queen Jaydes be the same...
| Hazel Cat chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Super long but Super good! Keep it up!
| P.T. Piranha chapter 8 . 12/13/2009
I thought something was bad about that guy.