Reviews for Please
eri imai chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
Ooo so rough so good I love this one!
RoxanneTheGreat chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Just now, I'm staring to get into this paring. Or well, Kira in general. X3
Lone Angel in a Trenchcoat chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Scary... O.O but beautifully written. Meh hat goes off tah yah *bows with a Gin grin*
MiyukiShinodaMindFreak chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
T_T My nose started to bleed reading this. Beautifully written buddy.
RazorLike chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Wow. Yeah, you did it. This is Ichimaru Gin and he's a bastard, one of his kind. You got him absolutely perfect, I'd say...

Yeah, even if I didn't like Gin as I always do, this was a great FanFic! Well done Zayaz-chan!
God and the Fox chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Very nicely done!
talking cockerel chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
Hot! Awesome job with the violence. I'd give anything to read about the other mentioned episodes of sex and violence between these two.
Mz.Neko-chan SP chapter 1 . 4/18/2009


great writing wow uh.. damn uhh...


/ I would have never thought of that kind of shit but I like it dawg!

but DAMN...DAMN!

that was...woo...wo

I can't put how kickass that was in to words
xrosiex chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
wow, that was brutally hot, I loved it
The Warped Hatter chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
OMG amazing! Well done
Blackiswhiteandwhiteisblack chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
wow that was hot. I really like it a lot. Good job, keep up the the good work. *_* _
Shinku Getsuei chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
omg the extreme pain mixed with the extreme pleasure... you cant help but feel it throughout your entire body.

i loved it
Aoi Azarashi chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
O.o wow, sadistic/masochistic much? hehe that was pretty damn hott though. great job
GoThIcToMokO chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
Oh my God... It's so realistic that I really had the impression that Kira and Gin were shagging in my room (the dream of my life *_*)! I really enjoyed your story, your writing is truly amazing!

[Just a curiosity: do you read Bleach DJs? Because the part when you say Kira betrayed Gin with Renji sort of reminded me of a Doujinshi I had read... ]
fantasmaalineal chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
oh, I see. You use Kira as a thing, as a toy for Gin. Horrorfull lust, very well written. And Izuru is a real addict endorfine-pain...

He will never escape. Never. He cannot, he dont want it...

You are an evil genious...or a kind writer who makes happy -the hell, i dont find the correct phrase- this both (a sus personajes)


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