Reviews for Your not a monster
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
Probably one of the best fanfics I've read in awhile! Would be amazing if it was continued
lilarcor chapter 2 . 2/27/2011
Nicely done. Although, if I remember correctly Yuka had accepted

the relationship between Kouta and Lucy. And that night on the stairway Kouta already helped Lucy to deal with her guilt so you could have focused on the progress of their relationship more, and

their future, like...the diclonius species WILL rule the world and like so.

Still, nicely done!
SociopathicBox chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
Both stories were excellent, I'd love to
Anonymous chapter 2 . 9/22/2010
Ohh this is soo cute!

Please continue! :D
KekiAiKohi chapter 2 . 8/16/2010
awwww soooo cute and hmmmmm happy?
ForgotMyPassword.damn chapter 2 . 4/15/2010
Hahaha, Yuka bashing. Excellent.

I'm sorry to all those Yuka fans out there, but she is a b*! She irritates me so much! Anyway... time to actually review the story.

I thought it was a good paced 'one-shot' and explained the dynamics of the Kouta/Lucy/Nyuu relationship. They have a love that is so beautiful... it's pretty much the only beautiful thing in Lucy's life.

The idea that Lucy has killed so many people, and yet the deaths she really regrets is Kouta's family, makes it a very grim and gritty plot line.

She devotes her life to finding the childhood friend she longs for, and it doesn't really matter to me as a viewer who she kills, as long as she gets to Kouta and finally apologizes. I think it's sad in the Anime it was never really shown that their love couldn't be requited... But I thought that it probably wouldn't work any other way.

However, you proved me wrong.

I guess it's still entirely possible for their romance to bloom.

You are really growing with your writing, and I think that if you continue then you will really be a great writer. Just remember to check completely through when it comes to spellings, and include a little bit more awareness of the surroundings, not too much detail- still keep it simplistic.

Apart from that, there isn't really anything to improve on.

TY for the Yuka-selfobsessedbiatch-bashing, that was fun! :] X
Would You Hurry It Up chapter 2 . 1/23/2010
Very nice! You should definetely keep on developing this! This is really good.
rose chapter 2 . 12/19/2009
i a wonderful story please continue
xxforbiddenlove07xx chapter 2 . 12/5/2009
sweet! hope you'll continue this :P
Elia950 chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
O_O i certanly didn't expect a second chapter! good work! i love Lucy and Kohta insieme
Themulchmeister chapter 2 . 10/17/2009
Very good. I like the way you've continued on from the end of the anime. Poor Yuka eh. And now Lucy's regrowing horns. Sounds like a good story that you could continue
Some Random Elfen Lied Fanatic chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
Hello! I have long since given up hope of this story ever being more than a One Shot. To show my appreciation, this is the first review I have ever written... ever, and I have been reading these EL fics for a long time. I love your story! Your writing isn't perfect, and I noted several grammatical mistakes (such as the use of 'excepting' where you should have used 'accepting'). However, this is still one of my favorite stories and I love it regardless. I'm really glad someone has focused their story entirely on the LucyxKouta theme, as most others simply incorporate that as a small element of the story. It seems strange, with as many stories on here that begin with Lucy returning to the Inn, they all quickly move on to some other conflict, or are abandoned after a few short chapters. All in all, a wonderful story, and I really hope you continue it further. I'm not much of a writer myself, but there are a few things I have noticed among some of the best, most reviewed stories here, if it's of any interest to you. The first is details. Though some of them go into far more detail than necessary, to the point where it becomes frustrating, most seem to go into a fair amount of detail of the world they are describing. The sights, sounds, noises, etc (This can also help increase word count, if that matters to you). The second is character development. Many of the other stories delve into the mindset of the various characters and further unveil them to the readers. Either way, I'm not trying to tell you how to write your story. I just noticed many authors seemed to be dying for ways to improve their writing, and this being my first review, I decided to help in any way I could. Anyways, I love the story, and I hope you continue it!
Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
good story
Mighty-Glacier chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
that's so sweet and that's how the anime should have ended
Souls of Fire chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
Wow, this is really good! A couple tiny mistakes here and there, but not enough to bug me. I really like it. You should do more than just a one-shot. *nods* I've added this to my favorites and hope there's more to come! 8D
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