I like this.

Hey... this didn't show up on my alert... did it? *pouts*

Twas very good!

it's wonderful! you should write a prequel full of fluff and show what their life(and innocence) once was (upon a time)

Oh...angsty

That was really depressing. But still pretty all the same.

Wow, I like it. Great title too.

I loved the subtlety of emotions that pronounces itself with every word, emphasizing every fact and idea in the dialogue. Good job! :D

T_T So sad D:

Hmm, wouldn't it be nice for her to say something like that to him and walk away instead of staring at him xD

Keep writing stories :D

You're the only person who's stories I'm reading right now XD