Reviews for Slow Down
4EverFan chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
Okay, that was awesome! I loved it. My fave part was when you told that little bit about Karma's scene with the spider webs. That was such a great story. You really captured the scene and put it into words perfectly. Please keep writing about Acceleracers!
Rae Kitano chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
Wonderful. You are very talented with your short stories.

As much as I try I stuggle to keep anything I write short LOL
august child chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
Wow! That was awsome!

I was thinking about doing a cooking one! But you did it better than I ever could!

Keep up the great work!
Dubious Writings chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
Lani must suck at cooking...I would do the same...only I would bin it and get some instant noodles.

Anyway, Awesome. Sparky would say the same.
Ilada'Jefiv chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
Aw! So sweet! Great job! ~Ila