|Reviews for The Diary of Namine|
| Kiroshi87Yamato chapter 11 . 5/19
This story has some good potential, but it is so hard to look beyond the numerous grammatical and spelling mistakes. I can definitely understand that, if English isn't your primary language, but either way we gave a beta reader function. If someone is doing that for you, then I highly recommend you switch readers, and plow through the chapters to clean up the errors. As it is, I need to stop reading this...even though I don't want to.
| Code knight chapter 19 . 10/22/2016
I love it. Aqua's baby is so cute... but I'm a little sad that ven wasnt in the story.
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/1/2016
This is ok but please stop with the gay stereotypes thx its really insulting
| lumenite88 chapter 20 . 3/22/2016
I'm crying right now.
| Allie chapter 19 . 3/18/2016
It is quite nice, good job!
| Yuki Hikari Strife chapter 4 . 12/8/2015
I CANT STOP LAUGHING XD OMFG SORA REALLY!
| Dodi Dream chapter 44 . 9/8/2015
Hey, hello! :)
I don't know how to tell you how much I love this story!
I always known that it would end with a RokuNami and I so happy for it, 'cause RokuNami is my OTP 3
Every time I could read a new chapter of The diary of Namine I felt so happy, even now when I finished to read the story.
I loved so much every characters of this story... I like so much as you characterized Sora, Roxas and Namine especially, after all they are the main characters!
Really, I don't know what to say because I know that no words would be enough to tell you how much I love this story... suffice it to say that this story is so well written that, for example, when Roxas was kidnapped by Vanitas... and Ventus was murdered in front of his little brother... or when Sora told Roxas that it was his fault that Ven was dead and that he would prefer that it was Roxas to be dead... I don't know how to explain how much I felt bad for Roxas in those moments.
When Namine found out that she was pregnant for the first time I felt somewhere between happiness and concern... I was worried for both Roxas and Sora's reaction and I felt relieved when Sora has forgiven Namine and Roxas for go to bed together :)
For all nine months of pregnancy I was hoping to Roxas to came back to Namine, and the day of the concert, when Roxas comes down from the stage and runs to Namine and they say "I love you" to each other... it was very exciting!
And even after when they was at the hospital and Vennis and Soren were born... I loved that chapter! And they are a very happy family! :D
I hope that Vanitas will be accept also by Roxas and Namine... I know how they felt about him anyway :( but he has suffered much in his life too, so I was happy when Sora decided to make him part of his family... even though I felt bad also when I known that Vanitas has murdered Ven :(
However, I love this story so much! 3
Thank you for writing it, it make me feel happy :) 3
| Unknown reviewer chapter 15 . 7/24/2015
I know this story is extremely old and finished, but it slightly irks me that sora beat roxas to the punch. Still, I'll continue to read on and hope it can be redeemed lol.
| Unique01 chapter 44 . 6/9/2015
This was such an amazing story and surpise that I read it in about 3 days. I love this story so much that I'm a bit sad that its over. You write such amazing storys. Keep doing what you're doing because what you do is going to be fabulous~! Love ya !
| Did2009 chapter 10 . 6/9/2015
I knew it! All along! I knew they had another brother that died! I just knew it! (and I knew it would probably be Ven) Awesome chapter! can't wait to see Namine's answer to Sora and the details about Ven's death and why Roxas blames himself T-T
| Did2009 chapter 4 . 6/7/2015
Haha, another great chapter XD
Though I must say I saw all of things coming (Especially Sora kissing Namine while being drunk, that was a classic XD)
| Did2009 chapter 2 . 6/6/2015
Loved this chapter just like the first one, it's more interesting than what I thought it would be
'Kingdom Hearts'... That's an original name for a band lol and it makes sense Roxas would be the singer, after all he is dubbed by Jesse McCartney XD
| Did2009 chapter 1 . 6/6/2015
Hey, I must say this is a really cool start, I think I'm gonna love this fanfic XD
The way you describe things and events, especially character reactions is really good, very detailed and clear
About the whole love triangle thing, I am very curious about who'll Namine end up with, I have no clue as of now XD
I found some parts very funny, especially the part describing Roxas and Sora's past roommates, I couldn't stop laughing when you mentioned Sephiroth XD A serial killer? Haha, you are very original, I'l give you that XD
So, anyway, great start, I'm sure it will be an awesome fanfic
| ajsensabaugh chapter 44 . 4/13/2015
I have to say I absolutely HATE that Roxas won but the story was so good I had to keep reading! The way you portrayed Sora just reminds me so much of myself and hat makes me sad that he lost! But it is still a great story!
| Symone chapter 44 . 4/11/2015
Hello, I know you probably won't get this, but let me just say I absolutely LOVED this story! Your writing is a gift and I hope you will continue on with it. I will continue to read your other stories as well.