Reviews for Fenton to Phantom 1: The Beginning
stormrider7 chapter 24 . 5/1/2009
Haha, no problem.

Ooh, very exciting chapter!

GO VAL!

Fiona's starting to seem more cool.

The Keira-is-an-ugly-ghost thing was interesting :D Very visually dramatic XD

You know what I pictured? That little creepy thing at the end of Charlie the Unicorn 2 :P

You know, the one that's singing about "Put a banana in your ear"...
stormrider7 chapter 23 . 5/1/2009
COFFEE

Keira's really annoying the crap out of me now.

Kill her.

Soon.
xXDiscardedDreamXx chapter 22 . 4/29/2009
yay, your back!

oh no, Valerie knows!

you write very well )

haha i think you drink too much coffee...
stormrider7 chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
Maybe you should have done your holiday homework in the holidays, Kirst.

Yeah.

Hmm... at least Valerie seems to be taking it better than Maddie!

That's an improvement, right?

Right?

You deserve some coffee!

*gives coffee*

Alright, bell's about to go for homeroom.

Later!
stormrider7 chapter 21 . 4/28/2009
Keira got used to the smell of decaying animal carcasses?

What a fascinating young girl.

I'll read your next chapter tomorrow, I'm dead tired now.

And what the crap? YOU ALWAYS DO THAT!

"Oh, I'm going to transform in front of someone - *end of chapter; new chapter* JK, I'm so not! LOL U!" -Danny-

*facepalm*
stormrider7 chapter 20 . 4/28/2009
Hahahaha

Vlad's hard to get :D

And Valerie has coffee

AND YOU DON'T

I'm ringing your mother if you get some.

I was in your dream?

Awesome :D
xXDiscardedDreamXx chapter 19 . 4/25/2009
crap you update fast!

poor Danny (

Maddie seems a little OOC. maybe she's acting like that because she's so shocked? she could be ashamed that she's been trying to kill him for so long O dunno.

that was really awesome!
stormrider7 chapter 19 . 4/25/2009
DIE, MADDIE, DIE! *glares*

Haha, I laughed at your plan... :D
stormrider7 chapter 18 . 4/25/2009
TOO SHORT!

STEPH NEEDS MORE!

Steph also needs to write a plan for her own fic.

:)
stormrider7 chapter 17 . 4/25/2009
They totally had sex.
stormrider7 chapter 16 . 4/25/2009
...wow, eight ghostly wails! Didn't see that coming. That was really clever

Great chapter, Thirstyn!
stormrider7 chapter 15 . 4/23/2009
OH MY GOD SHE IS GOING TO FIND OUT

YAY

Noo, I want more before you go D:

That was EXCITING.

I wonder what's on Valerie's mind ;D
xXDiscardedDreamXx chapter 14 . 4/22/2009
What? Another cliffhanger?

Now that was just mean!

Update soon, before you go away? :)

Have fun!

I want to know why Ishyama is calling Valerie! That was random.
stormrider7 chapter 14 . 4/22/2009
Wut? Noo! No cliffhangers!

That was very cute :)

Although, I must say, surely Kelly has collected enough evidence to put two and two together and figure out that Danny Fenton and Phantom are one and the same. I mean, at least the rest of Amity Park didn't know that a halfa could exist, but seriously, Kelly knows it's a possibility. She suspected it of Sam, so why not Danny? Freaking DANNY?

Anyway, update soon!
xXDiscardedDreamXx chapter 13 . 4/21/2009
ohmygod

HEY

this fic is AMAZING

update soon!
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