Reviews for Trapped
personalninjaturtle chapter 2 . 1/12/2012
well done! i love all the character dynamics you brought into this! you have great dialogue, and what you write really sounds like the characters! there were some sentences where i read and it just happened in the character's(or actor's if you want to be picky) voice!

great job, i loved this, a really cute but true to the show and the characters story :)
FairyNinjaPrincess chapter 2 . 8/13/2009
This made me smile!
Riley Carbine chapter 2 . 7/20/2009
I'm convinced now...there need to be more Jack/Nathan friendship fics, they make so much more entertaining firends than they do anything else. You wrote this magnificantly I loved the ending and laughed through a lot of it.
Rosimae chapter 2 . 1/26/2009
Yay! This was really good, and I'm glad you kept to just friendship, there are way too many slash fics, which I don't like! I think you captured the characters really well! Hope you write more!
funvince chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
I am quite impressed with the dialogue and witty quips. It really sounds like stuff Stark and Carter would say. I like that they're bonding but still maintaining their 'animosity'.
padawanjedi chapter 2 . 9/3/2008
I really liked your story. I thought you captured Jack's and Nathan's banter pretty well. I hope you will do some more stories for Eureka, as there aren't enough out there!
angelkitty77 chapter 2 . 8/29/2008
this was great i love how they worked together and still snarked.
queenskin chapter 2 . 8/19/2008
The friendship thing between Jack and Nathan in your story really works out pretty well.
kuroima chapter 2 . 8/18/2008
This was awesome! The banter at the beginning was great and you managed the change really good. The end was funny. lol Good story.
Chianna chapter 2 . 8/15/2008
I loved this line:

“At least I’m here,” Stark told him with an almost suspicious smirk.

The Sheriff frowned at that, looking suddenly disturbed. “Yeah… I’m screwed.”

Nathan smiled.

This read just like watching an episode. Nicely done.
foolwiz chapter 2 . 8/15/2008
nice ending great story!
Gurn S Grndal chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
Wow I really like your story, it's probably the best Eureka story I have read.

Please don't let it become one of many story's were the story ends in jack/nathan slash. There is enough of them already.

I have been waiting for someone to write an exciting story where Jack gets injured, because let's face it, he is clumsy.

Keep up the good work and please post the next part as soon as possible :)
foolwiz chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
i like the story update soon, i hope they survive
neosildrake chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
While I'm an avid slash fan (*waves NathanJack banner*), I also like friendship stories right next to slash.

Your story is great so far. Nothing better than a little life and death situation to bond over. And Nathan and Jack would make exceptional friends. Everyone who sees the show knows this. They do not really hate each other, it's more competive and since Jack cannot compete against Nathan in science, the only way is/was through Allison. Allison finally choosing one of them leaves the field open for the friendship to develop, if they want to.
Cainwen the Warrior chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
Hmm. interesting. And well written to boot! More please!
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