Reviews for Gum Wrappers
MoaningMomoMormon chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
*sobbing* that was really good, really depressing, but really good, loved it.

NLaddict chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
aww, poor neville...
twinklewind chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
I'd love to see a tantrum scene, and something of resignation, mixed with a pouting your lip out kinda "not fair!"

But it's good. I don't know, Neville's sorta hard to reach.
rjlupin12 chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
:( Poor Neville.

That was really well written, good job.
serindraxx chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
aw, that is sad. i loved it though.

snochik21 chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
That is sad. But very good. Very...Neville-like.
Moonshine 369 chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
This is so sweet- so sad. Auto fav.
silverbirch chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
I like stories about Neville and his parents, especially when they are as well written as that one.

Congratulations on not trying to overplay the emotions; it made it far more powerful.