|Reviews for Golden Angel|
| supertokyogirl.vs chapter 88 . 4/15/2013
Wow! I just finished reading this and It took me about 3 days, but this was just about the longest fanfic I have ever read! This story is amazing! Its obvious that much thought and creativity went in to this incredible crossover between avatar and TMNT! BTW Artemis is sooooo awesome and badass! Lol she is so cool! I loved how you made her the families guardian and protector. The end makes it seem like the story wasn't over though. Did you intend to write more, or was that really the end of this awesome fanfic? If it wasn't, I hope this review reminds you of this unfinished story. And if it is, I hope this review brings you joy in that people are still enjoying it. :-)
| SPark681 chapter 88 . 12/20/2012
Awesome story and I if I recall there is a 2nd story to this so I will have to check that one out as well. Anyways keep up the great work!
| NIGHTANGEL21 chapter 28 . 12/30/2011
thanx the first chapter might take a while but it will be up soon thanx again ;-) angel
| NIGHTANGEL21 chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
chibi thank you so much it helped alot especially the short bios part anyway check out my home page im making a story about the tmnt so i would really like it if you could take a pick at my summery and bios i would really like any advice you could give on the story or the charecters themselfs and if you want if you really like the first chapter would you spread world around so it could get more veiws i know it is alot to ask of you but your golden angel seris was the first story to get me into tmnt fanfics so i just want your opinion&advise on how to make it enjoyable for the viewers and myself
see u in the pages ;-) nightangel2011
| NIGHTANGEL21 chapter 2 . 12/28/2011
golden angel is one of my favorite stories on fanfiction along with many other stories you wrote i just wanted to say thanx and keep writing i personally think you have a talent for writing especially when its about our four green heros!
| L-lover chapter 24 . 5/13/2011
Please don't take this as me trying to be mean. I was really excited when I first started reading, and I feel that you have a very good skill of writing. However, I feel that you've made some strange choices in your story. You're starting to feel cliche in it by adding all the avatar stuff. Believe me, I'm a huge fan of avatar, but if I wanted avatar, I would have picked an avatar story instead. I feel like, maybe, you should put warnings up throughout your story so it doesn't just pop up out of no where like it did. You were sticking really well with cannon, and it seems like you just added it on impulse or something. It really took me off guard, and I started feeling less of a pull to keep reading. Like I said, I'm not trying to be cruel about it, but maybe you should reread it yourself and tell me what you think afterwards.
| jhgiusdhiu chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
I read the whole story and you did great
| xxXAngel of InsanityXxx chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
| Krypticated chapter 18 . 9/11/2009
I LOVE this fic!
But there are two tiny-weinie things that are creeping me out.
Namely that the Shredder thinks a turtle is hot and that Leo and Artie are siblings...
But besides that, this is AWESOME!
| xKumax chapter 55 . 12/18/2008
Aww poor Chi and Kasai, they really don't like water and they live in the sewers. I'm hoping for another Karai/Artemis fight soon... hinthint.
Good chapter _
P.S I'm gunna do some of my own writing now, i'll get back to reviewing when I can!
| xKumax chapter 54 . 12/18/2008
Hee hee, as if Chi didn't know about the Turtle Titan! I would have thought Mikey would have dressed up for her by now :P
| xKumax chapter 53 . 12/18/2008
One minute- aw.
The next minute- WHOA!
And here's me thinking those two... ahem... activities, would be swapped between Leo and Raph :P
| xKumax chapter 52 . 12/18/2008
Okay, I take it all back, Kasai is my favourite out of the girls now _ She's sweet.
| xKumax chapter 51 . 12/18/2008
Oh gosh, I almost cried at that last bit. I need to toughen up... Anyway, I love how you did this chapter, especially how you got Kasai to see Raph's soft side. Good job! _
| xKumax chapter 50 . 12/10/2008
Okay, firstly, mwa ha ha ha cool! I was wondering when the wings came in _
And secondly, 'sniffle'. That was sad :( Artie's gunna get all over-protective again isn't she?
Good chapter _