Reviews for Fevered Tension
AmutoStAr7 chapter 3 . 6/16/2014
how did he leave? genjutsu?
AmutoStAr7 chapter 2 . 6/16/2014
He was gone?
The Last Deathly Guardian chapter 7 . 11/25/2013
Is it going to be some brother sex thing in the next chapter? I don't see the arousal in that...
The Last Deathly Guardian chapter 6 . 11/25/2013
Ok...I just read this chapter straight out. I didn't eve. Read the previous ones. I know it's ridiculous but hey * shrug* I got it from google.
Silence-Ell chapter 6 . 12/4/2009
I squeeled like a diseased fan girl at the name of this chapter. A threesome with two sexy brothers...I know it sounds gross, but a girl can dream...I loves it
HemaCookies chapter 8 . 11/7/2009
Great so far why mush da good strys die so young. Well nyway can u send me da link plz n thanx.
Yumeria Sendai chapter 8 . 9/1/2009
Okay I love the story and after reading your note I decided I'd like to adopt it! So, I've never adopted a fic before, but is it okay with you? I have written my own stories and ha e posted here as well.
freakhorrorchick chapter 8 . 9/1/2009
Could you possibly let us know who you give it too so we can find the continuation?
zyeIN chapter 8 . 8/29/2009
i never write lemons before, so honestly speaking, i'm sure i'm not up to it. anyway, i'm just here to review ur story. i like it, really! (though i'm not into incest much). i really hope you'll finish it (when i read the chapters before i read this note). well, i hope you'll continue writing magnificent stories after this.. keep up!
hypheniated chapter 8 . 8/29/2009
aww...that's sad...

are you going to post up who you gave it to?
blupomme chapter 6 . 8/29/2009
Ah! I thought there would be a threesome, for some odd reason. xD

I know you're giving this away, but i'll still read it.

And at the end~! I think I know which one you're talking about...

"I'm Yours" by sasukelove2?

I just know one chapter ends that way, with that chick named Miho.
SasuSaku Forever and Ever chapter 8 . 8/29/2009

uhm. i dont think i can do it. Dx lol. but seriously; you're so awesomesauce. i freaking LOVE YOU.
EWHH its Kenna chapter 4 . 6/8/2009
Screw what other people want for the pairing.


Do what you want.


You're the author(ess) aren't you? That's right. You SO are. So you choose the pairings and make the readers shove it.

Except me.

(: I don't wanna shove it.
EWHH its Kenna chapter 6 . 6/7/2009
I punt a child every time you don't update this.

And even though I've totally read your author note on your profile about your updates, I figured I should just let you know that. ;)

:D kthx.
ManicBlueRose chapter 7 . 5/21/2009
Very nice, please update soon!
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