Reviews for Goodbye Mike
DieHardTwihard chapter 1 . 9/17/2014
I swear, I died at the diharrea one! And now my mom is looking at me wierd.. So anyway I could totally picure this happening! I will remember this forever... xD
ForeverRobsessed chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
Loved it! Mike is so delusional
NeverBeenMerelyPretty chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
"My love for you is like diarrhea. I just can't keep it in!" That was absolutely hilarious! I loved this
sonnenblumeues chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Oh my! How stupid can a boy be? "My love for you is like diarrhea. I just can't keep it in!" Yuck!

Great story! It made me laugh like mad. :-)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Mike is dumb if he would have thought that the last pick-up line he used on Bella was any good. I love portraying people as dumb whether thet are or not-especially when they annoy me.
krotoxo chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Ahahahah! I loved the last one XD
HarryAndGin chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Great stuff! Thanks for sharing.
jus2read chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
LoL p Hilarious ))

MsBitaboo chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
This story cracked me up. it is so funny i pissed my pants!
ImDiffrentSoWhat chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Oh man that was so funny.
PAraMoR chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
RenesmeeAlec fan chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Liked the story, it was super funny!
Princess Aziza chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Cute! I can just see Bella stuffing food in her mouth like a chipmunk!
kitsune Rose420 chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
WOW! This story is definitly different than the normal stuff I read. I loved the dirahea line. It's even more funny for me, personally, because I knew a guy, who was almost exactly like Mike. He was just a tiny bit more stupid... Anyway, great story!
LethalFuror113 chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
I love this story! And your disclaimer! May I use it?

Spelling is very good, a few grammatical errors, though. Read this aloud to yourself to help.

Yay! Good story!
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