Reviews for Asian Disaster
TFFWFKA elejamie -retired chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
PLEASE add more chapters. So far, it's just the one.

Can you make it, in a future chapter, Ed becoming Edzilla and accidentally destroying Japan (you can choose if you want any one of the 4 islands, or, in fact, all 4 islands, to be destroyed), or Jimmy trying dog meat (yes, you can eat dogs in some parts of Asia).

In fact, it could be as funny as European Disaster if you kept working on it.
smn08 chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
wow...the whole school colapsed?This is gonna be great,but what happened to the cul-de-sac kids going to the momuments of america?
Guy With 1000 Names chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
Asia, huh? The Olympics are gonna wrap up soon, so could you have the gang go to Bejing and have em frag the Bird's Nest please?
Kriftonucci chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
Well it's all right

My suggesstion as constructive criticism would

Be to at least to take more time on your jokes (

after all, movies like "meet the spartans" already

have the title for corniness) But other than that, it's

A good start. Just try not to be repetitive (in other words,

Come up with something other than Jimmy throwing up)

Hope for the next chapter.

Kaiser Spartan chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
oh boy...i pity Asia now...anyway glad you wrote the next part of the destroying continennts series...have them mess up the Olympics, the Emperor's Tomb (you know the place with all the clay soilders and all), the great wall of China, cause flooding with the yellow river dam thingy, and different stuff