Reviews for Try to Look My Way
HoneyBee1 chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
Aw...that was a nice moment for Gomioka. He's rather cute though. Maybe you can make more fic about him, please? Thanks for a great reading! I really enjoyed it!
Desaix chapter 1 . 3/3/2002
Sorry I never replied to your e-mail... things have been insane in my life for a few months, now. They haven't really gotten any better, but at least I've got a weekend of peace...

I found a few small patches of grammar mistakes, but I'm sure there are plenty of those in my own fics as well. As a vignette... yeah, that's precisely how I see Gomioka. Kinda hiding in the shadows, hoping Shinobu will notice him... while not doing anything to really attract her. Maybe being a little jealous of Captain Gotoh, as well...

Interesting how much can be put into a character who has, what, about a minute or two of face time in the entire series?