|Reviews for On Vacation|
| Galaticx chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
i'm not trying to be rude but you have a few names wrong and it's Kamakura not Komakura. The wolf's name is timber and the eagle's name is freedom in the show. I don't know if you are calling them that bevause you forgot the names and or these are diffrent animals. Bye!
The cunning ninja who could be anywhere,
| The Mute Bard chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
nice fic. Good character dialogue. my favorite is how the cunning ninja falls victim to the common jellyfish!
| ninja enchantress chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
"He is able to shoot a power stone out of a Cobra ship that in the air from over a mile away, but he can not roast a marshmellow." hahahaha long range can't roast a marshmellow hehehehe ok i'm good now this was good wish i could have been there!
p.s. i have a request think u could do an oc with snake eyes?