Reviews for On Vacation
Galaticx chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
i'm not trying to be rude but you have a few names wrong and it's Kamakura not Komakura. The wolf's name is timber and the eagle's name is freedom in the show. I don't know if you are calling them that bevause you forgot the names and or these are diffrent animals. Bye!

The cunning ninja who could be anywhere,

Kiba hebi
The Mute Bard chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
nice fic. Good character dialogue. my favorite is how the cunning ninja falls victim to the common jellyfish!
ninja enchantress chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
"He is able to shoot a power stone out of a Cobra ship that in the air from over a mile away, but he can not roast a marshmellow." hahahaha long range can't roast a marshmellow hehehehe ok i'm good now this was good wish i could have been there!

p.s. i have a request think u could do an oc with snake eyes?