Reviews for Wasted
lyttleski chapter 4 . 7/3/2009
Hey, I know this is a long time after you posted this story but I only recently started using this site so I thought I would try a review on something I Like. I actually Really liked the concepts. These characters feel more real to me then many other stories I've read. I like the way Alex and Lindsay's relationship is developing. It would be great to see how that can grow. The only real improvements i can see would be working in more details and everyday events because i was a little confused at the skipping between time frames and characters, like when there is dialogue between Alex and Lindsay it was a little hard to follow who was talking. So with those changes with detail and fluidity this story could be amazing. All in all I love the story and it has amazing potential. I would love to see more of it. Please keep writing ]