Reviews for Naturally
Blackberry chapter 1 . 4/27/2016
It's too adorable ! You got both Shin and Sena characterizations spot on like I can totally imagine something like this happening in canon ! The awkwardness between the two of them is sweet and you convey the atmosphere most splendidly . Hope to see more in the future . Have a nice day !
Mo chapter 1 . 12/27/2015
Was cute :)
theSardonyx chapter 1 . 11/13/2015
Cute ending.

Write on.!
berry5tz chapter 1 . 3/19/2015
I loved it! Thank you!
Hweianime chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
Holy crap so damn cute! If only shin actually kissed sena! Hahaha hope you write more of these! Keep fraternizing with the enemy sena! YaHa!
Gwynhafra chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
Awesome! You've put in a wonderful dose of romance between the two, yet kept Shin in character throughout. Thank you so much for writing this. ShinSena needs more love
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
That was great, sooooo cute loved it!
Kichou chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Cute story. I liked it.
DevianYUE chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
fking adorable! 3333
Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
this is very nice!
mangagirl64 chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Loved this story. It was really cute.
Hibary-Hiwatari chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
! ! ! This was just too f*cking good to be true!

It was lovely, sweet, nice and.. and.. and SO CANON!

When i grow up, i just want to be like you :'D

Also... i have a request to you...

Can you update "the way to a touchdown" please? pretty please? pretty pretty please? -beging pout and little puppy eyes-

I just hope to read something else from you because i think you are oh-so-DAMN-awesome as a writer.

Until then, take good care of yourself! O
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
Your Shin is so in character! I cant help but love your fics, even tho I dont really ship ShinSena, mostly cuz they are awkward as hell, and mostly not them at all, but you! You make them happen so naturally! I can totally imagine these situations happening. And god was is it funny! Especially qhen Takami and Sakuraba appear, I laughed so much at them taking advantnge of Sena, and their delight, too! Thank u so much for this amusing fic!
reckless-rage chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
This is really adorable (even if I'm 3 years late to the fandom!).

"Sena blinked. Well, it was Shin after all, so it wasn't that weird that he considered football his work and homework his free time."

...XD Homework in his free time, goodness.
Tears Parallel chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Aww, the crew just ruined the moment. Why didn't they come just a few seconds after?

I love how you wrote the detail in about how Sena cured Shin's inability to use a cell phone. It just tells us how important Sena is to Shin. 3

And the end, where Sena ran off and Shin was there with the cell phone strap poking out of his pocket...

Excuse me while I go giggle to myself :D

(Thank you for writing such a cute oneshot!)
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