Reviews for Heat and Sun
blankardtheeighth chapter 2 . 10/1/2018
I’m impressed so far. I love how you’ve given Deidara a decent backstory and how the setting and plot is already being set up for encounter. It’s also a great plus that you have a decent vocab and good use of grammar. Keep going, you’re doing great!
Jen kenoha chapter 3 . 4/2/2018
Wow, soooo good. I encourage you to continue this fantastic story!
Ahh chapter 3 . 3/3/2018
I wish this was finished it started off amazing
Oh well it's very old now
mulch chapter 3 . 2/10/2016
This is hilarious! :)
Gal Can't Help It chapter 3 . 12/12/2015
Although this story isn't going to be continued, I still think it's written well with an interesting premise.
Linda chapter 3 . 12/15/2014
Awe, I love the story!
I hope you'll go back to this and maybe finish it because I'm sure it would have been just as awesome as your other story " Somewhere I have never traveled, Gladly beyond" and maybe even better 3
Much love from Meee
AwaitTheRise chapter 3 . 10/22/2014
Totally loved this! Wish it was finished, but you can't have everything, right?
LostFran chapter 3 . 2/21/2014
I hope you continue this story one day, it's a really interesting plot :)
I-write-for-enlightenment chapter 3 . 12/8/2013
I hope you continue this story, it's very interesting!
November Ember chapter 3 . 7/30/2013
I hope you continue this someday!
perilouslips chapter 3 . 9/27/2012
I have enjoyed quite a few of your other stories, but I have a bad habit of not leaving reviews on account of reading through all available chapters at once. Suffice to say, I find everything I read to be excellent, tempered between emotional intensity and hilarious bits that make me laugh out loud.

Anyway, this story is right up there. I'm a sucker for solid characterizations of Deidara and Sakura both, which you do extremely well. And while I can't admonish any other writers for lack of updates (chaptered stories are haaaard), I wish you inspiration to continue this story. It is thoroughly enjoyable. :D
sasuke's duck butt hair chapter 3 . 7/29/2012
Can't wait for the next chapter :) This is a very interesting idea, and the idea of Deidara and Sakura working together with Deidara devoid of all his ninja skillz is fabulous.
JustYourAverageGirl chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
The first chapter is great so far, but I can't help but notice that you haven't updated in like 3-4 years.. T.T I hate it when authors write GREAT stories, but never finishing it. I've only read the first chapter, and I went to read some of the reviews.. My face fell when I saw that there was so many people begging you to review. I decided not to read on, for it would be pointless.

Great story so far..
JustYourAverageGirl chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
The first chapter is great so far, but I can't help but notice that you haven't updated in like 3-4 years.. T.T I hate it when authors write GREAT stories, but never finishing it. I've only read the first chapter, and I went to read some of the reviews.. My face fell when I saw that there was so many people begging you to review. I decided not to read on, for it would be pointless.

Great story so far..
Delicate Desires chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
I really like this! I've read your other deisaku fic many times- I can't get enough of your writing! I'm excited to see more of this story! I hope you update soon!
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