I’m impressed so far. I love how you’ve given Deidara a decent backstory and how the setting and plot is already being set up for encounter. It’s also a great plus that you have a decent vocab and good use of grammar. Keep going, you’re doing great!

Wow, soooo good. I encourage you to continue this fantastic story!

I wish this was finished it started off amazing
Oh well it's very old now

This is hilarious! :)

Although this story isn't going to be continued, I still think it's written well with an interesting premise.

Awe, I love the story!
I hope you'll go back to this and maybe finish it because I'm sure it would have been just as awesome as your other story " Somewhere I have never traveled, Gladly beyond" and maybe even better 3
Much love from Meee

Totally loved this! Wish it was finished, but you can't have everything, right?

I hope you continue this story one day, it's a really interesting plot :)

I hope you continue this story, it's very interesting!

I hope you continue this someday!

I have enjoyed quite a few of your other stories, but I have a bad habit of not leaving reviews on account of reading through all available chapters at once. Suffice to say, I find everything I read to be excellent, tempered between emotional intensity and hilarious bits that make me laugh out loud.

Anyway, this story is right up there. I'm a sucker for solid characterizations of Deidara and Sakura both, which you do extremely well. And while I can't admonish any other writers for lack of updates (chaptered stories are haaaard), I wish you inspiration to continue this story. It is thoroughly enjoyable. :D

Can't wait for the next chapter :) This is a very interesting idea, and the idea of Deidara and Sakura working together with Deidara devoid of all his ninja skillz is fabulous.

The first chapter is great so far, but I can't help but notice that you haven't updated in like 3-4 years.. T.T I hate it when authors write GREAT stories, but never finishing it. I've only read the first chapter, and I went to read some of the reviews.. My face fell when I saw that there was so many people begging you to review. I decided not to read on, for it would be pointless.

Great story so far..

The first chapter is great so far, but I can't help but notice that you haven't updated in like 3-4 years.. T.T I hate it when authors write GREAT stories, but never finishing it. I've only read the first chapter, and I went to read some of the reviews.. My face fell when I saw that there was so many people begging you to review. I decided not to read on, for it would be pointless.

Great story so far..

I really like this! I've read your other deisaku fic many times- I can't get enough of your writing! I'm excited to see more of this story! I hope you update soon!