Reviews for Control
misspooky chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
Loved it, wonderfully written!
DauntlessTheBrave chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Hah! So much self-control needed, their gunna have to have a lot of time to practice.
LauraJanIce chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
This was really cute and sweet.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
Very sweet
LoveTwiGirl chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
This serie is really great. But, this is part 8, and there's no 6 or 7. I think you might have wrote the wrong number, or something.
Chonga815 chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
This was so great! I loved the response "Are you mad?" when Bella went to feel up Edward. That is so Edwardian! Keep up the writing you're doing a great job!
intensewhatever chapter 1 . 12/26/2008

Nice! Great job! You could totally make this oneshot into a lemon filled story but you probably won't do that because that wasn't the purpose of the story. Oh well! I liked it a lot!
Sakuraangel1327 chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
and wheres drabble 6 and 7?
Blue-Eyed Chica chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
lol love it well thats GREAT control he has...
sambeam chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
that was good
FrogKaos chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
This story is so unbelievably cute :D I like it better than what actually happened in Breaking Dawn. :D
OMGDaisie chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
You write Bella and Edward very well. I love how you kept their characters true to the books :)
Merciless Ruby chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
feathers! jajaja! nice one shot!