|Reviews for Paranoid Note|
| Gagaofevil chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
This is really good! I especially like how Greg believed that the notebook was calling him stupid. I love how the characters are so eccentric. And definately NOT Mary Sues! Please write more soon!
| My Sublunary Soul chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
xD This is great!
A serious thumbs-up for the entertaining OC's. I especially love the boring/typical names, the boring/typical jobs, the boring/typical setting, and the total eccentricity of the characters themselves. However, as a word of advice, I'd warn against making the characters too over-the-top, or else they may stumble into "crackfic" territory (which is humorous, but not very versatile). Unless, of course, you were going for a crackfic. :)
Run, Greg, RUN! Beware the government's origami! D8