|Reviews for hearts and halves|
| Twinnet chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
I love it
| AGENT Kuma-chan chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
sentence!fic does seem rather fun...
(I think I shall join it later. Once I've done my other communities.)
Rather cute and sad and humourous, some of them...They give little tidbits and flashes of a big story, enough to tease but not enough to fill.
| coconutmandarin chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
GAH I LOVE IT! The beginning was so sexy and the ending was beautiful. There's a tiny typo in damn. Thrilled, I believe. MORE!
| pilkul chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
amazingly awesome! i love these sentence fics. they somehow build a really nice fic! bybyyu
| Miss Ligenza chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
| Invisible.Words chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
You need to write more. please! Oh my goodness. Who hit her? In the Bully one someone hit her. who?
| Wabi chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
Sometimes it was a bit hard to understand, because the timeline was so jumbled and disjointed, but I still liked it.
Also, I found an error:
“Sakura-chan’s really happy with Fuzzy Brows,” Naruto mused, as he slurped up the last of his ramen, “I bet you’re just !trilled! that she’s finally leaving you alone, huh, bastard?”
| nothing but blue chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
loved it! in my opinion, it takes a lot more skill to write just one sentence than a whole story. you did a great job with this! :D
| O.o Kaoru-chan o.O chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
| AlmondBlossom chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
| extraordinaire chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
Aw! I loved this so much, and though the theme is a bit confusing, and that they all don't connect, it was still enjoyable. Great job!
| MYinnerNINJA chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
i like it. i teared up a bit sometimes. it's really good!
| dark Alley chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
This was very amazing! I look forward to more of these!
| the mockingjay chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
These were amazing and lovely and painful all at the same time. Some made me lol and others made my heart wrench.
I think my favorites was "fame".
So when I saw "metaphor" - just the prompt - I immediately giggled because Anne, your metaphors are generally hilarious and totally random.
| Neitzarr chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
It was very fast, but the was sort of the point.
I have to say the first one was funny.
And it was sweet. But kinda twisted and ...well I liked it. :)