|Reviews for The Hardest Journey|
| just be platonic chapter 20 . 1/7
I'm so happy that you updated! It seems troubles always follow Neji and Tenten, even when they decided to settle down. They need each other in order to survive, that much is true. Please keep up the good work :)
| jazzberryjuice chapter 20 . 12/28/2014
Can I just say that this is an AMAZING story?
I always get so excited whenever THJ alerts pop up in my email. I'm really sorry for not having reviewed earlier T_T I've been meaning to; it's just always slipped my mind.
Anyway, I just love your descriptions, vocabulary (sybaritic?), and smooth writing in general. I admire all the research and effort you must have put into this to make it so realistic.
| santizhizi chapter 9 . 12/15/2014
This story is so great. I haven't finish reading yet, but I couldn't help post this review as soon as possible, just to say something.
I'm ashamed to say that even though I'm a Chinese I don't know of all the historial facts in this fic. The history textbooks don't tell facts very objectively, while those TV dramas are just craps in a way... Anyway, I'm shocked to find that you know so much about that war. Considering the cultural differences, you have done a great job writting Chinese people and environments, as well as language.
By the way, I love the titles of every chapter. These's a lot of fun recognizing each one of them as familiar Chinese proverbs. And the usages are all correct. You must have spent long time on the research.
The idea of this story is really amazing. I haven't thought that this kind of AU can bring such effect. There is no Chinese NejiTen fanfic based on this setting or something like that at all - in fact there is very few Chinese Naruto fic based on WWII, either. You know there are some troublesome things about name of the General of Japanese Army and so on, thus the uneasy feeling drives many writers back when thinking of this idea...
I will continue reading this great fic and reviewing. Hope you update more:)
| Spiral5 chapter 5 . 12/3/2014
Oh my gosh! This is so good! :D I'm wrapped. Lol.
| Spiral5 chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
Wow. This is great! So exciting so far I'm smiling. :)
| white noise and brine chapter 20 . 11/30/2014
i audibly gasped when i saw the alert for this chapter and though i wasn't able to get to it immediately, i've got to say: it was well worth the wait, and it's very clear that you put a lot of care into your work. the line "he has lost this war" really just kind of struck me down to the core. in fact, all of the ending lines of each scene were really well-written and well-placed. i love the way that you've written their dynamic, love the way that they're vulnerable with one another (with their conversations and their actions and their almost-desperation in the midst of all this suspense and never quite reaching happy endings) but never quite vulnerable enough. also, you're so great at writing cliffhangers! you have such a way of captivating the audience and pulling them closer to the edge of their seats, but it never gets trite; it's very interesting to look forward to how each chapter ends. thanks for the update! (:
| Freedom Phantom chapter 20 . 11/16/2014
Very great chapter! Thumbs up! It's nice to see a new chapter once in a while. I really like your long chapters, they're worth the wait. Again, thumbs up!
| Ami1010 chapter 20 . 11/12/2014
OMG, a very long chapter and so much happened.. It's really packed and so worth the waiting. An update of this story makes me really happy.
At the end of the last chapter I thought that something very bad was about to happen in the house they found because of the feeling Neji got, and you kept repeating it in this chapter too but nothing happened. I highly doubt that you added that only to trick us into thinking that something would happen. I wonder if it is the whole thing with the plane, but I don't think so.
Now I wonder if they are still going to be alone when they awake.
Enjoyed the chapter a lot, like always. Thanks for updating. :)
| Hopi chapter 20 . 11/12/2014
Oooh, an update! Wow, as good as ever! I can't wait to know what happens next :)
| RaiNiccle chapter 20 . 11/11/2014
An update 33 this chapter is so intense alot happened here and it is worth the wait, I love how Tenten is so curious and caring and they are finally realizing their relationship and the fact that they are a team keeping eachother safe is so sweet and the story is just great cant wait to read the next chapter! :)
| yazaru116 chapter 20 . 11/11/2014
wow great as allways! looking forward to the next chaptr.
| Lady Rini chapter 20 . 11/10/2014
I was thinking about you since the manga ended. I know your super busy this time of year, so I wasn't expecting you to update until the summer lol. I still wished Neji did not die in the manga but what can you say.
Review:I think it was foolish of Tenten and Neji to try and help that pilot. Now they are both hurt again after finding a place to stay to live temporarily.
| Akum chapter 19 . 10/18/2014
| videogamenerd101 chapter 19 . 9/11/2014
Wow. This was great.
First of all, some criticism. I feel like the part where Neji falls was really rushed. It came out of nowhere and was too unexpected that it made me question it and go wtf. If there were more development to lead up to that event, I don't think this would be a problem.
But anyway, I love how lemony you made this chapter. It fits really well, honestly, considering everything Neji and Tenten have gone through since the beginnin of this story. It really captured how terrified the both of them must be right now.
I wonder what'll happen to Tenten. I hope she'll be fine. Anyway, update soon!
| Orz QUEEN OF RANDOMNESS Orz chapter 19 . 9/3/2014
hey just finished reading/catching up and i wanted to applaud you for the deft usage of vocabulary and lack of grammatical or spelling mistakes :) keep it up! i also enjoyed the pace of the story and the amount of research you put into it. it was interesting reading about what happened to my ancestors in a fanfic XD the history lesson was very welcome (Y) can't wait to read more