Wow this was nice!

This is actually nice too.
Though I feel that it would've been better with a tragic ending. I mean, 1/2 - 3/4 of the story was serious to angst then the ending was a smut-ish happy...
I still like it regardless though. 9/10

You've taken a 3000 year old Ancient Wyrm and turned him into a maggot. Do you know why? Because YOU are a maggot with your whole entire world constrained to the insides of an apple. You are so pathetic that you cannot imagine that any worm could ever outgrow a single maggot-infested apple.

Well maggot, I can't say your story was fun to read, but it sure was edifying. You are utterly pathetic, maggot.

Simply mind blowing! I read a lot of fanfiction but rarely post a review. But after reading this master piece I couldn't help myself.

I love you're story

Interesting story

Oh my gosh I love this one shot... This is definitely my new favorite

This is so beautiful.

I legit cried so much..

Hot DAMN that was a fine read! Well done!

I'm not sure why HyperCatnip went on an incomprehensible rant about time-travel. It's not even the same dimension Naruto is returning too. Perhaps he's been reading too much Sci-Fi.

Overall this was a nice story. Very satisfying for just a one-shot.

This one-shot is wonderfully written and I enjoyed reading it.

However, there are some minor problems.

First of all, time travel.
Time travel is an ascension to godhood.
It is slow. It may be painful and tedious.
It leads to godhood without fail unless you do some really stupid mistake, or are opposed by fully fledged god (or another time traveler with a head start on you).
For reference, see infamous "Chuunin exam day". Naruto there is kinda lazy and a little slow. His ascension is still inevitable. For all its character bashing and stupidity, time travel effects on personality in "Chuunin exam day" are spot on. Naruto of this fanfic doesn't sound like 3000 years old. time traveler at all.
He sounds more like Naruto-Sasuke mix. Eugh.

I'm also not a big fan of equivalent exchange. It was a lie in Full Metal Alchemist, it is a lie in real world, if it is true in world of this fanfic than that world is hell.

And, a final note on time travel. Once time travel is on the table, the only one with a choice is time traveler. Nobody else in the Universe has any choice is any matter ever. Pretending otherwise is deluding yourself.

Also, did I mention Naruto in this fanfic sounds like a stupid teenager and not a wise and very experienced time traveler with multiple lifetimes behind him?

I understand that goal here was a sappy melodramatic love story. Concessions had to be made. However, you butchered time travel for melodrama.

Still, you are better writer than most, just not the best. Thanks for this one-shot. It was an entertaining read. Flawed, sometimes stupid, but entertaining.

Excellent one shot! Felt like I was watching a nice Groundhog Day Naruto version haha. Sad to see it end!

just wow.. unique

Well, this story was entertaining for sure. It's a neat concept, similar to that movie groundhogs day. I really liked the fact that you made Naruto and Sakura soul mates. overall this story had a really nice mix of humor and seriousness, and I loved how it ended.