|Reviews for Three Cold Showers|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/13
I actually quite liked this. I find it a bit hard to believe Draco wouldn't just wank for morning wood, but I understand it's there for the story's sake. I never would've guessed you weren't a native English speaker, you did really well with spelling and grammar.
| ElyzabethRose chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Personally I think your English is far superior to many people for whom English is their first and main language. The fact that you are so fluent in a second language is refreshing. As for your actual fanfiction; there is an amazing plot, short but it keeps you wanting to read, the characters are clear and follow those of the actual book yet you made them your own! I loved your story and think you are an amazing writer! Keep up the good work!
| tamjau chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
hei säki oot suomalaine ! :D eka, joho oon törmänny tääl :o anygay, lyhyestä virsi kaunis: hyvä ficci. :)
nice job :)
| Luzitania chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
Very cute. Thank you.
| xXxStarStrifexXx chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
That was really nicly laid out and you really shouldn't put yourself down so much! Your English is loads better than that of many English people I know. At least you can spell and have a decent grasp of English grammar. It was a well written story too! :)
| Kyrie Colors chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
I commend you on your English! It is far better than my French!
This story was cute, and I think you should do more. The world can never have enough H/D fluff. :)
| egg10rru chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
Your english is very good! I liked this story a lot!
| MissBehavior chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Aww, that's so sweet, and Draco is kinda cute
I really liked the ending, it's nicely phrased xD
Keep up the good work )
| the.gold.in.the.shadow chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
that was so sweet! i love the way you set it up, and even though i wanted to read more, i like that you ended it there. i totally wouldn't have guessed that your native tongue isn't english. you write a lot better than many born and raised english-speakers i know. oh, i also wanted to mention that my name's Hanna too, no 'h' on the end! (i went to your author's page which is why i know this.) lovely story, can't wait for you to write more!
| P. Cythera chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
i liked it :) good work :)
| ShamefulDesire chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
I quite liked that. More would be wonderful. Great work!
| fcvalley chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
Bad written? Bah!
It's perfectly written. (God, you should read some of the Native English speakers writting...They make my eyes hurt!)
And now you HAVE to write about that Jack squirrel, I happened to fall in love wiht him (Yep, even if he didn't kind of love life)
I can already imagine the new slash tendency Draco/Jack/Harry.
Once again, excelent job!
| MissRandumb chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
This was really good!
I don't know what you were talking about with grammatical mistakes, I happened to find none.
Draco/Harry is such a fabulous pairing, isn't it?
I could always beta for you if you ever wanted.
I have no idea how to beta, seeing as I've just signed up to be one, but I could try fiddling around with things.
| Daaro Moltor chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
yeah, lack of talent... sure... no.
You dont have a lack of talent even if you compare yourself to Rowling herself!
And I didn't find any wrong spelling in this storry (maby because I'm from sweden, but it wasn't any major...). ;)
And i'm werry glad that you translated this storry.
'Cause I can't read Finnish...;D
| moriah93ohio chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
I liked it. It was good.