Reviews for Here Without Me Version 2
yuki kawaii chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
aww. that was sad. i liked how it was written. you were able to reveal everything without explicitly telling the facts. good work with descriptions and dialogues. ;)

i didn't quite like the ending though. it's so sad that that should happen to mi-chan. and fuuko... i just hate her here. *bangs head on the wall*

anyway,good job! God bless and keep writing. :D
Irma.Arisa.Laye chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
this really made me cry! :(

wa! :(

but a great story indeed! ;D
Nils chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
Mou, that was truly depressing. It feels so pitiful to imagine it. I can't congratulate you enough for having expressed those emotions so well. It was truly well written. Good job!

I hope they get together again! Please update soon!
yanagi-chyan chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
and tokiya's going to live and they'll realize they still love each other and fuuko dumps raiha and they'll live happily ever after. The end.

That's how it's going to end, isn't it?

huwa.. coz any other way would make me even MORE depressed than right now! gawd, you tug my heart with this fic. bravo, job well done! love the angst and the hint of a possible happily every after ending.

*rans off to cry*
Midnight Sleepyspray chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
Sorry I've been missing lately. Haven't visited e-mail yet.

I'm having trouble because I don't have my own computer, and I'm just using my cousin's. And since she and her bro's very busy lately, (and me too) I don't have time. I'm just using the long weekend to catch up.

I find this version good enough, and touching. I just wonder who's the assasin and what his motives were. I'm thinking about Raiha, but heck-he wouldn't do that. And yes, if Fuuko does love Mi-chan, then she'd stay. I'd say, happier than the original one.
satomika chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
i don't know what to say...


i didn't read it in the middle...

i might just get angry...

and angsty and i might be crying in front of the monitor...

but i did read the last parts...


i really feel like crying!

but i have no time for that coz i'm reviewing for a major headache quiz...



it was nice...

i like the words that echoed through the whole fic...
Lyris chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
I like this version better. I'm a little sad though cause its one shot, its got real potential for hard core angst plot multi-chap hehehe. I hope to read more from you. Its been quite a while since I read your last fic