Reviews for The Love Bug
Silverian Rose chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
ha ha derek has the love bug

love it!
Sailor-Lit chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
LOVED it! I'd keep this a one-shot, 'cause the ending just...Fit
Living.By.Will chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
hehehe That was great!

I really liked the YMCA part where Derek got a tad distracted!

hehe It made me laugh...

Great as a oneshot, maybe a two shot! Im up for anything!

True Love Lives Forever chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
Derek talking, or thinking (same difference), to himself like that was great. I sure would love to read more.
monkey-monkey-underpants07 chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
ha ha. i love that sam just knew. i always liked sam. :)

i really liked ur one shot. :)
SNN chapter 1 . 8/14/2008

This was awesome. Totally original and you completely captured a freaked out Derek.

Loved his random outburst of "Y-M-C-A." LOL

I especially loved this part:

"I’m dead. I am officially dead. Have me cremated and spread my ashes over…"

I mean, seriously. LMAO That one had me cracking up.

Keep up the great work! ]

DASEYS.lillies chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
i loved the story! this story is really great just as it is but it would be even better with another chapter.

your a great writer.

poor derek, he's all confused. :)
tentitoo chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
this most be a two-shot story! please make one more chapter!
wprincessannw chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
lol that was cute and funny :)

and I hope that one day Ralph will actually say that to Derek...cause someone needs to! lol
ShadoweGoddess chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
oh oh oh!

Frogster chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
More please! A two-shot would be great.
MeIsWatIam chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
LOL! FUNNY! love the ymca if you cann u shouldd make another chappiee...hehe
Vryn13 chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
Oh can't wait to read what happens next. This isnt a one shot is it? Cuz it says complete but i done want it to be (whiny voice) plz don't let it be a one shot :)

Ahh i've actually always thought it would be cute if Ralph told Derek he liked Casey and Marti told Casey she liked Derek.
LorMenari chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
This totally screams two-shot!

But, good job!

blinnn chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
I think this should be a two-shot! just cuz everyone loves a mutual Dasey scene, and not just a one-sided Dasey, even though this is really good! :)
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