Reviews for Alvida Loves Luffy? A Woman With Smooth Skin
ZeroSanity chapter 1 . 3/31
Rapemealvida chapter 3 . 12/3/2015
Continue this or get butt huuk
Infinity Comes To A End chapter 3 . 8/8/2014
Went to Webster's Dictionary to look up the word "clueless". All I found was one word. Luffy.

Alvida has it REALLY bad for Luffy the idiot doesn't know?! Get it together man.

Btw, you very going to update?!
StrongGuy159 chapter 3 . 10/9/2013
Cool 3 chapters continue please.
doubledamn chapter 3 . 9/14/2013
Luffy Harems are so much fun aren't they? And since this is eventually going to be Luffy X Nami X Alvida then I'm going to classify it as a harem even if it is only threesome. Good story, I'm liking the conflict between the current and new crew, Sanji's reactions are always the high point because i think he's an a$$. I actually think that Sanji is just a comic relief character who happens to be a strong fighter. Can't wait for his reaction when he finds out Luffy's got Nami as well, that should be fun. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to new chapters soon.
J chapter 3 . 8/2/2013
update this is an epic story
jacobmillenbach37 chapter 3 . 12/26/2012
hope to see the next chapter then.
the naru foxxx chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
so um any chanse for an up date
Why the hell chapter 3 . 8/4/2012
Why the hell does nami always just sit by and watch these things happen. She doesn't have to actually end up with luffy but you always make her sit back and watch as the person she cares about gets further and further away from her. You should make her do something about it. It would add more depth to your stories and character development for luffy if the older female( Robin or Alvida and whoever else) shows him her feelings and then nami doing the same would confuse him and add more of a conflict in the story. Luffy blushing and having his heart beat is way outta character. The feelings of nami or robin or whichever females are included in the story should feel some rising sense of jealousy when luffy shows interest in another female and then have them explode their feelings onto luffy all at once.
SmileRen chapter 3 . 2/17/2012
I like it but I'd rather see Alvida and Nami get along.

By the way, are you still writing this story?
justin the constant reviewer chapter 3 . 4/7/2011
update i mean come on this is the only luffy alvida story u must update or i will haunt u forever
justin chapter 3 . 3/2/2011
where is the last chapter it been 3 years since you last update and this is like my favorite pairing oh and i love the dessert scene genius man now continue with the story
justin chapter 3 . 2/20/2011
oi oi keep goin with the story man whats up with the cliffhanger oh and more luffy alvida smoochn
Tyurruu chapter 3 . 12/10/2010
lol this is going great but when do you plan to end this fanfic? cuz if you go on to intruducing vivi then wouldn't it lead on to arabasta?
luffyxrobinluffyxnami dude chapter 3 . 8/8/2010
finish this freaking story up! i keep trying to find long chapters to be engrossed in but i find there not finished! finish what you started as the sayn goes, please -_-


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