|Reviews for His Wyrda|
| Labysa chapter 10 . 8/13
Very well thought of and written. Obviously ooc but who cares lol
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/13
Omfg what a ride. You had me giggling my ass off almost every paragraph, mostly bc Paolini crushed my soul when he left the series where he did and HOW he did. It was a great ending. don’t get me wrong, but there were so many unfinished storylines. Your story has helped fill that void slightly. Amazing Work! I even enjoyed the non romantic shit, which I’m sure you could improve upon given more time. Lastly, I beg you to consider writing a sequel to the inheritance cycle. I believe you might do it justice
| SOMEONE chapter 11 . 2/27
This is the best fanfic i've read so far, least out of character
| The Grizzlysnake chapter 11 . 2/24
Wow. I know I’m a little late to the party, but I love this! It’s well written, has a good plot and is an amazing read. And it still stands on its own, years after The Inheritance Cycle has been completed. I know it’s never going to happen, but I’m really intrigued to see where this goes, and how it affects the events of Brisingr and Inheritance.
I am so glad I read this. It’s amazing.
| Guest chapter 11 . 10/30/2020
| Zolar33 chapter 10 . 9/6/2020
Saphira is the BEST wingwoman ever. Or wingdragon...
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/14/2020
| JoBettany chapter 11 . 8/5/2020
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/14/2020
I'm reading the Inheritance Cycle for the second time and I just finished book 1. That being said I was already looking for Eragon and Arya fanfics to read. It was a great contrast to watch the two of them meet for the first time in book 1 and then to read what their love should have eventually become.
Thank you so much for putting this out there.
Hope you're safe and well during the pandemic
| Pharthrax chapter 10 . 5/23/2020
This was very sweet! A few of the chapters were rather hard to read *cough cough* chapter 6 *cough cough*, but overall I had a good time reading this! It’s been on my “read this soon” pile for, like, forever, but I never got around to it. I’m glad the lemon wasn’t super graphic, I think that would have cheapened and undermined the whole plot. In my opinion, I think Arya would have probably had a harder time getting over her memories from Gil’ead, and Eragon would have been super sweet and patient and helping her every step of the way, but I am not you, so, oh well. Don’t get me wrong, I still greatly enjoyed it, just a bit of (hopefully constructive) criticism. Two other things have to do with spelling: Elvin should be Elven, when describing something elf-like, and you used taunt where you should have used taut, a few times i.e. “Murtagh released the taunt bow string”, it should have been taut. Other than those minor corrections, wonderful story, loved reading it, there’s not enough of Eragon/Arya in the world!
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/13/2020
I loved the story, and you portrayed the characters so well, It was excellent
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/23/2020
Wow, thank you so much for writing all that. I just spent the last couple of hours completely immersed in your story when I should have been marking papers. I really loved your writing and your ideas - so well written. Thank you so much.
| SpellcheckAlways chapter 11 . 3/29/2020
Just finished reading this and loved it. Very late to the bandwagon but it was beautifully written all the same!
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/20/2020
Great story. Loved it. It’s hard to find a good eragon Arya fanfic. Even so long after book 4 came out.
| teddreads chapter 10 . 1/28/2020