Reviews for The fight for freedom
H-bomber chapter 6 . 8/22/2008
A bit corny, ok, its REALLY corny. but it's still good chapter. Corny, but good.
omegarulesall chapter 6 . 8/22/2008
this was great, funny as well. i really enjoyed reading it.
omegarulesall chapter 5 . 8/20/2008
this was good. hope you update soon.
H-bomber chapter 5 . 8/20/2008
It was alright.
H-bomber chapter 4 . 8/19/2008
Ooh, this was a good chapter.
omegarulesall chapter 4 . 8/18/2008
amazing chapter. hope you update soon.
omegarulesall chapter 3 . 8/16/2008
excellent much better than before. this is really getting good. hope you update soon.
tri-rose angel chapter 3 . 8/16/2008
great chapter, i loved it. update soon 'kay
H-bomber chapter 3 . 8/16/2008
This was a good chapter. Though I do feel for the captain. I mean having someone claim that a child will save the kingdom would make most people skeptical.
BlueIrish chapter 2 . 8/16/2008
haha, cool plot. i like it, reminds me of 'Freedom Fighters' the video game. good goin! :D
omegarulesall chapter 2 . 8/15/2008
this was good. i especially liked the part at the end. a bit of advice, spend a little bit proof reading your story, it will help cut down errors.
H-bomber chapter 2 . 8/15/2008
This is pretty good. Though Mido is a big douche.
omegarulesall chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
interesting. i want more, hope you update soon.
H-bomber chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
Ooh, this seems like a good story. It definatly (sp) has a better start than your last one. Lets see if it can also have a better ending.
tri-rose angel chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
This was amazing. lot's of action, right of the bat. update soon'kay