Reviews for Torn Apart
blank chapter 8 . 4/20/2013
conti siegel chapter 8 . 11/25/2010
i must say: brilliant story
Chocogirl24 chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
Awesome chappie!
account has been canceled chapter 7 . 12/28/2009

but im so super glad you didn't abandon this cuz its too super awesome to be abandoned! )

i luvs it so so much you are awesome and EK! WHERE IS NUDGE?

i can't wait for more, update soon before the suspense and lack of an amazing story KILLS me

do you want to be responsible for my death!

i should hope not cuz my parents would SUE you!

so please please more soon pretty please with sprinkles on top! its AMAZING!
simranm chapter 7 . 12/28/2009
nice story. its a great what if thing
Silent Broken Heart chapter 7 . 12/28/2009
I'm glad you updated and I loved the chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next and where nudge is.
Summer Days And Summer Nights chapter 7 . 12/28/2009
I really liked this chapter...please update soon!
account has been canceled chapter 6 . 12/23/2009
coolio its awesome!

but the infor bar says you havent updated in nine months! *gasp*!

have you abandoned this story?


i want more now!


its so good and i wants more pretty please!
MaeMae xD chapter 6 . 4/12/2009
Its okay. Its just..the flock would never do that. Well, yeah., They would. But they would jump up to save Max. nd Max would be fighting the whitecoats.

Other than that. Its really good. Please continue when you can.
Blue1221 chapter 6 . 4/5/2009
You haven't been updating.*taps foot impatiently*

And it was getting really good.

Will there be FAX later?
LittleMissFallenAngel chapter 6 . 3/31/2009
Oh I do like this story! and you where right mine is sorta like yours at parts.
weirdpeopleruletheworld chapter 6 . 3/27/2009
apparently you didn't want to review 'tomorrow' as in the 10th. oh well! it's a great story!
Rose the Wary Wolf chapter 6 . 3/25/2009
love it write more
osocurly chapter 6 . 3/18/2009
this is good
Vamps-with-Wings chapter 6 . 3/12/2009
This is awesome. . . Yeah this is just really awesome. What else is there for me to say? I absolutely love it. . . . and you need to update soon. . . before it kills me!
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