|Reviews for Legends of the Obsidian King|
| Krishka chapter 3 . 8/19
This story just gets on interesting. It has been a long time since you updated it, but I hope someday you will. Normally I request authors to put up an outline, but the writing style and the suspense and drama of each sentence is just too good. But your summary/outline will also contain these elements, so I guess it would be nice.
I especially loved the last line in chapter 3 and the buildup lines to it. Not only lil' Itachi taught himself to read using complicated Kanji but drew several interpretations and assesed elemental affinity from a scroll, all in a span of three months. It would be pretty interesting to read of non-fire affinity Uchiha, especially a clan heir. Also it's nice Itachi has his own mind and not succumbing to parental pressures, though with his hidden talent on display for all to see how long will this last one cannot tell. I love Shisui so I hope he stops being such a prick and become the Canon adorable Shisui.
Hoping you'll continue.
Have a wonderful day :)
| Ghost024 chapter 3 . 7/21/2015
Ha... Great ending for this chapter.
| Rikkudo chapter 3 . 11/10/2014
200th review! WHOO!
But seriously, fantastic work. I know that you've pretty much abandoned everything on this account, but know that I would do ANYTHING to have been able to read the rest of this. It was that fucking good.
| 372259 chapter 3 . 8/5/2014
THIS STORY IS ABSOLUTELY INCREDIBLE!
I legit only ever read romancy-actiony-angsty stuff on fanfiction, but I saw the summary for this and thought, 'hmmm, nothing better to do.'
Then I started reading it, and I couldn't stop!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS FANTASTIC STORY ! :D
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/28/2014
This is Great! I don't usually like Itachi as a main character, but well sir, bravo!
| The Kazekage of Suna chapter 3 . 6/26/2014
Itachi's portrayal is brilliant here. So collected as others can't even contain the shock. His father didn't even deserve the glance from the oldest child anyways! Serves him right for doubting such a child!
| The Kazekage of Suna chapter 2 . 6/26/2014
Even at his age, the impassive attitude and lack of expression plays excellently. When Itachi threw the sticks back to the boys, I was waiting of him to kick some serious ass XD! This is Itachi we are dealing with after all! It was nice you added in his hits were sloppy, it defines the age gap here.
| The Kazekage of Suna chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
All I can say is wow...the flow was perfect, I was heavily interested, and your writing is gorgeous.
| kellyshl chapter 3 . 6/20/2014
| HermioneeBlack chapter 3 . 6/16/2014
i am glad who ever it that told you to post. great chapter.
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/23/2014
This is wonderful!
Thank you for writing this!
Please, Continue it,
- A devoted fan
| AlmostElectric chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
I AM NOT WOOOOORTHY.
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/7/2014
Not sure if you're even still active on this site, but this is honestly too good to leave in dead embers instead of the blazing conflagration of an epic that it is clearly shaping up to be.
Hope one day you might come back to this one. Until then, take care.
| FlowerPrincessoftheUniverse chapter 3 . 4/25/2014
| A.U. Writer chapter 3 . 4/14/2014
Two words: Kick Ass.