Reviews for Maze
omgnotagain chapter 19 . 9/14/2010
Just to let you know that I'm taking a break from Floyd. Seem that last night I dreamed that he was knocking outside my front door and that really freak me out. Since I live alone...

omgnotagain chapter 3 . 9/12/2010
poor floyd!
tellygirl chapter 20 . 9/2/2008
Finally finished! Great stuff as usual but I wish you'd slow down,I'm having a hard time keeping up! Right,onto the next fic to see what happens next :oD
tearbos chapter 17 . 9/1/2008
"Emily was right and it saddens me that the boy who was so enthusiastic about everything I had ever done has been reduced to a smear of blood in the back of a van abandoned in the forest."

It saddens me too!

ambrelynn chapter 20 . 8/31/2008
Brillant! Really good chapter! I cried (yes I did) on the last one .

I'm sorry for poor Aaron so alone ,He's a good man .

The way Floyd try to fight against himself (does it make sense?) sometimes is heartbreaking.

the relationship Reid/Floyd is " I can't live with or without you" .

I love your writing .

Please MORE ...can't wait to read more.
LestatHughLover chapter 20 . 8/30/2008
Very interesting!


Still wanting more...

But more in new fic right?

LestatHughLover chapter 19 . 8/30/2008

I love it when Floyd get's the last line!

Because it's always a fantastic line!

and sweety.. :D that was brilliant!

Absolutely wonderful!

*cackles with glee*

Loved it!


Aggie Escott chapter 19 . 8/30/2008
Poor sad lonely Aaron...such a truly 'good'person, up against an evil person like F what chance does he stand? \if only Reid would see that he is so much better fo him and leave F but he never will - cos u sister are writing the fic! LOL

(maybe I shd write a chappy! roffle)

TheLovethief chapter 18 . 8/30/2008
So beautiful again.

And: Darn. Hotchner could've had Reid. In the shower. I mean, also afterwards...Erm. Long-term stuff, you know. Reid was waiting for him, even provoking him. Argh. I wonder how things would have played out if Hotch had actually reacted, and not only watched.

Then again: Floyd would have come back anyway.

Very lovely chapter!

Can't wait for more ;D
Aggie Escott chapter 18 . 8/30/2008
Poor poor Aaron - he wasn't in that one! LOL

I think u shd do a F/JJ chapter! Let him corrupt the pinky-person!

tellygirl chapter 18 . 8/30/2008
Finally,I manage to review! I like the fact that this story is written in first person perspective as thaughts give so much more info than words but sometimes thaughts can be wrong,like Reid thinking that he'll be safe with Floyd when I know he's be much safer with me! My thaughts are that as long as he is with Floyd,(who we know does love him),then Reid's in big trouble!
LestatHughLover chapter 18 . 8/29/2008

That was...

Oh my god...

That was brillaint!

Loved it!

Oh so definitely worth the struggle of the last chapter...

I don't know what to comment on first...


all of it was just excellent...

Ecstasy is being one of my favourite words... so perfect for drugs and sex.


Aggie Escott chapter 17 . 8/29/2008
Oh sister sister what a heartbreaking chapter. My poor sweet aaron, so hurt and so dignified. I wanna jump his b...erm I mean I wanna make him better cos he's wonderful and I love this chapter - one of your best.

So sister, Thank you for writing it.

thank you

thankuthankusis xx
LestatHughLover chapter 17 . 8/29/2008
Great chapter!

Glad that's out of the way?

Liked Hotch's flying... that was nice... :D

And Morgan at the end... lovely...


TheLovethief chapter 16 . 8/29/2008
Well, not quite sure how to put it. I love the language of this story. Not only the first person thing, also...don't know, it's very lyrical somehow. It's really a pleasure to read. Sometimes I have to read the chapters several times, because I just read it and enjoy it (the sound of it) without actually realizing what's happened. LOL

Really good. Kudos. And want more of course. ;)
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