|Reviews for Natural|
| Free2ExpressMe chapter 9 . 5/25/2009
I like how you didn't change the way the original characters acted. I love reading these!
| Free2ExpressMe chapter 2 . 5/25/2009
wow! this is an amazing chapter! your such an awsome writer and should seriously think about publishing a book! I love your work!
| sammy55 chapter 12 . 4/1/2009
I LOVED IT! I COULDNT STOP READING IT! OMG THAT WAS SO WELL WRITTEN!
| Dance Elle Dance chapter 12 . 3/28/2009
Wow, this was a really well-written and thought out BenAmy story. I just love these two together and I wish people would write more about them. Great work. You captured their emotions perfectly. I would love to see another BenAmy from you in the future. Amazing job! _
| babybaby15 chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
U should wright more like this one i really like it.
| onyxrush707 chapter 12 . 1/1/2009
Ben's so sweet...
| Yellow Rose of the Briar chapter 7 . 12/28/2008
My cousin Chad is getting married on that same day in June!
| The Void Kitsune chapter 12 . 12/12/2008
OhMyGoodness I loved it! It was such a sweet story!
| Aki chapter 12 . 11/19/2008
| Ghostwriter626 chapter 12 . 11/17/2008
aw thats so adorable i would love to go to paris someday
| shortbutsweetmont4 chapter 12 . 11/16/2008
oh my goodness...my dear, this was AMAZING! seriously. i know i tell you that every time, but it's so true.
and i JUST watched the clips...oh my goodness! i can't take it! i'm just so freakin excited!
| winchesterxgirl chapter 12 . 11/15/2008
that was beautiful.
| RenesmeeScarlet chapter 12 . 11/15/2008
That was an adorable chapter! Paris? I want to have my honeymoon there when I want to get married!
| BabyBeaver chapter 12 . 11/15/2008
OMG. That's AMAZING. It was a good final chapter. :)
I hate to bring up "mistakes" at the end, but I spotted, like, three.
"You’re dad", "He looks kind and harmless, so she approached" (tense?), "It’s was" and... I think that's it. other than that, super as usual. I'm looking forward to January, and to more stories from you. :)
| Boris Yeltsin chapter 12 . 11/15/2008
Aw, great end.