Reviews for Dove l'Amore
Anonymous Reader chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
It's good, the ideas are very developed and her character is all there, but i think you need to slow down a bit. The words are just coming at me, and maybe they need a little restraint. Try to keep your ideas in separate sentences. But I think you should continue with this one.
Ariadne'sThread chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
The image of all these men sitting in the ballroom with drool all down their fronts is too funny for words. Be careful with your metaphors.
MercyKyss chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
YOu set a scene very well. I would be intersted in reading more :)
firefly123 chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
This is an interesting start to what I hope will be a good story. Please continue with this!